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3/16/2013 c6 44Ansy Pansy aka Panz
Aw so moving and heartbreaking. I really liked their conversations
3/16/2013 c5 Ansy Pansy aka Panz
Ah idiots who try to correct you bug me so much! Glad you set them straight and you are most definitely right!
Loved this chapter, you created such an intense, charged moment, could really feel the connection and the heat!
3/16/2013 c4 Ansy Pansy aka Panz
Your chapters are amaing. So long and detailed and generally delicious! The characters feel so real and right to me
3/16/2013 c3 Ansy Pansy aka Panz
Aw love it! Really great emotions and quidditch descriptions and conversation xx
3/16/2013 c2 Ansy Pansy aka Panz
As I did forget that it wasn't a continuous story but it is still amazing and I loved all the details and clever things you thought up for this chapter
3/16/2013 c1 Ansy Pansy aka Panz
Aw great beginning and already so much emotion :)
12/13/2012 c17 15NobodyCanKnow
this has been one of my all time favorites since the beginning and i know it's a bit ridiculous to ask but it would be an amazing Christmas gift if there could be another chapter added. you have a great writing talent that's for sure, and your beta is great (if you have one). seriously this is one of the best LilyJames i have ever read. this is what i think about when i think of them. its perfection. please just think about it, por favor, it would be amazing to read this completed. much love!
8/20/2012 c17 40Serena Bluemoon
You're not going to finish this? ):
3/26/2012 c17 NewLife2014
hey i really like this story and you haven't updated since May! update plz? pretty, pretty please with a cherry on top? this is honestly a very good story so please update!
3/16/2012 c17 thestaganddoe
Pretty please update? It's so good! Except for the cockblock Lexi. She needs to go.
3/7/2012 c17 13crook-spanks
Pleez pleez pleez tell me there is more!
3/1/2012 c1 Mione Ravenclaw
I love your fic! Please, please,please, please, please, please don't give up on it! If you keep writing this good, I could read another 40 chapters!
1/28/2012 c17 musingmarauder
I love this! I hope you haven't given up on it because your story is wonderful. I really love how they got together and would like to see what happens next, especially with Lily's friends.
12/20/2011 c17 6verywellfandango
Oh, this was such an adorable story. I pretty much loved the marauders here, and I love how you toed the line, between where Peter's one of the gang yet at the same time, the bumbling one who gets crap for not being as smart as the rest of them.

Sirius I loved as well, and I loved that scene with him and Lily at the Potters', where they talk about family. Not many people bring it up, but I liked that sort of insight into Sirius' mind.

Lastly, I enjoyed the Lily/James interactions. It seemed very real, if a little sugarcoated. Though this may be cause Angst!fics have spoiled me, haha. But they were very well done, especially how Mrs. Potter commented on how James seemed to radiate inner peace or whatever.

I'm not sure if this fic is finished? You could actually leave it here, I was actually going to say it was an interesting twist ending, like, an interesting bittersweet tone. So yeah.

TL;DR: I loved it. You're a wonderful writer.
11/13/2011 c2 1gaap237
This story is so sweet! I loved the chapter of when lily needed james. Love Sirius's inappropriate jokes too!
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