for Our Moments5/15/2011 c17 Username HarryPotterLover8789
You know I never really liked Jenna. I used to know one and she was exceptionally similar to your character you've created..
Anyway I love your story and you write beautifully. And don't worry the wait was worth it, your writing makes up for it and all the drama!
It's perfectly balanced and believable. I admire your ability to make there story so lovely, I've had muliple tries and it still doesn't compare to yours.
Anyway I just wanted to tell you I love the story and considering I NEVER write reviews I literally can't wait forth next update. (also sorry I'm not logged in I'm on my iPhone at the moment and I just needed to review now!) -Taryn(:
You know I never really liked Jenna. I used to know one and she was exceptionally similar to your character you've created..
Anyway I love your story and you write beautifully. And don't worry the wait was worth it, your writing makes up for it and all the drama!
It's perfectly balanced and believable. I admire your ability to make there story so lovely, I've had muliple tries and it still doesn't compare to yours.
Anyway I just wanted to tell you I love the story and considering I NEVER write reviews I literally can't wait forth next update. (also sorry I'm not logged in I'm on my iPhone at the moment and I just needed to review now!) -Taryn(:
5/3/2011 c16 brieetard
oh dear, i got totally sucked into this story and it seems as if youve gone and completely ditched it:(
please dont let this be the case, its too good of a story to ditch...
oh dear, i got totally sucked into this story and it seems as if youve gone and completely ditched it:(
please dont let this be the case, its too good of a story to ditch...
4/30/2011 c16 Guest
Oh my god. You have to update! Don't bail on me now!
Oh my god. You have to update! Don't bail on me now!
4/19/2011 c16 
1Aetriqa
Admittedly, I was expecting a series of drabbles from the summary since I was in the mood for a light read, but that mood was quickly quenched as I got more into the story.
There are a ton of other enemies to lovers fics but yours resonates... something. It's touching, and I like the focus you give to Lily and James while keeping in mind their friends. I find many forget about one or the other sometimes, and the mix in this fic is just right.
My favourite chapters have definitely been Christmas break! Their family is absolutely adorable, and even the scenes with Lily crying were heart-wrenching yet oh-so-sweet.
I also absolutely can't wait until they tell the others; hoping it'll be something epic! ;)
Keep up the awesome work! Shall go peruse your other fics now~
3 Aetriqa
1AetriqaAdmittedly, I was expecting a series of drabbles from the summary since I was in the mood for a light read, but that mood was quickly quenched as I got more into the story.
There are a ton of other enemies to lovers fics but yours resonates... something. It's touching, and I like the focus you give to Lily and James while keeping in mind their friends. I find many forget about one or the other sometimes, and the mix in this fic is just right.
My favourite chapters have definitely been Christmas break! Their family is absolutely adorable, and even the scenes with Lily crying were heart-wrenching yet oh-so-sweet.
I also absolutely can't wait until they tell the others; hoping it'll be something epic! ;)
Keep up the awesome work! Shall go peruse your other fics now~
3 Aetriqa
4/8/2011 c16 Guest
Hey, your story's really awesome! Please continue writing and updating this story! I've been waiting ages for a new chapter!
Hey, your story's really awesome! Please continue writing and updating this story! I've been waiting ages for a new chapter!
3/3/2011 c16 Louie F
Jesus I'm lovin it!
Please don't stop posting it!
Don't take so long this time! lol
See ya!
Jesus I'm lovin it!
Please don't stop posting it!
Don't take so long this time! lol
See ya!
1/28/2011 c16 16drumer girl
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me you're going to update soon! i absolutely ADORE this fic and i can not WAIT to see what happens next. i love the way you've built James' and Lily's relationship...so much about it is so realistic and real; which is extrememly refreshing when so many L/J stories are incredibly cliche.i had an awful day today but i stumbled upon this fic and it totally made my night. epc!
16drumer girlPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me you're going to update soon! i absolutely ADORE this fic and i can not WAIT to see what happens next. i love the way you've built James' and Lily's relationship...so much about it is so realistic and real; which is extrememly refreshing when so many L/J stories are incredibly cliche.i had an awful day today but i stumbled upon this fic and it totally made my night. epc!
1/15/2011 c16 44MariPBlack
Hello :D Well, I've started reading your story in portuguese, thanks to Serena_Bluemoon. Then I came here to see if it was complete, how many chapters you'd written and when I saw the name of the fourth chapter (The Fisrt Time She Was Jelousy or something like that :P) I started reading it in english and just couldn't stop. And girl, you're a really good writter, really, congratulations :D But I have to say that Lily annoys me. Everytime I think she should do something she does exactly the opposite! LOL And I don't think she deserves James, really, she should die all alone u.u hahahaha Really, there were times when I would start screaming at the computer because of her :P But besides Lily I really like the story, so please update it soon ok? Oh, and just one more thing: please tell me Lexi isn't in love with James! It would totally ruin the character for me :( Well, congratulations again! xx (And don't be mad at me for what I've said about Lily, it's just what I think :D)
44MariPBlackHello :D Well, I've started reading your story in portuguese, thanks to Serena_Bluemoon. Then I came here to see if it was complete, how many chapters you'd written and when I saw the name of the fourth chapter (The Fisrt Time She Was Jelousy or something like that :P) I started reading it in english and just couldn't stop. And girl, you're a really good writter, really, congratulations :D But I have to say that Lily annoys me. Everytime I think she should do something she does exactly the opposite! LOL And I don't think she deserves James, really, she should die all alone u.u hahahaha Really, there were times when I would start screaming at the computer because of her :P But besides Lily I really like the story, so please update it soon ok? Oh, and just one more thing: please tell me Lexi isn't in love with James! It would totally ruin the character for me :( Well, congratulations again! xx (And don't be mad at me for what I've said about Lily, it's just what I think :D)
1/11/2011 c16 Abbi
Plz write more soon!
Plz write more soon!
1/7/2011 c16 AllAboutObsessions
You are really good at writing about romantic moments - I enjoyed reading it. The only thing I did not like was the whole thing with his family. They are to perfect and positive - it's one dimensional.
You are really good at writing about romantic moments - I enjoyed reading it. The only thing I did not like was the whole thing with his family. They are to perfect and positive - it's one dimensional.
1/3/2011 c16 writetoexpress
I love your writing style! This story is amazing! Seriously. I haven't stopped reading it for two or three days when I don't absolutely have to. Please update soon!
I love your writing style! This story is amazing! Seriously. I haven't stopped reading it for two or three days when I don't absolutely have to. Please update soon!
12/30/2010 c16 2Diamond Lily425
i loved it! i think you give a unique spin on the whole lily/james relationship, which happens to be my favorite pairing. or any of the marauders. love the pen name, too-the office is my favorite show. :)
2Diamond Lily425i loved it! i think you give a unique spin on the whole lily/james relationship, which happens to be my favorite pairing. or any of the marauders. love the pen name, too-the office is my favorite show. :)
12/27/2010 c16 2Scarlet Natalia
I LOVE this story :D I have spent the last two days reading it constantly. :)
PM me if you still need a beta- I'd love to do it! And I promise to be honest :) I like the pace of Lily and James' relationship and I especially love how natural they are together. It's really very good :)
2Scarlet NataliaI LOVE this story :D I have spent the last two days reading it constantly. :)
PM me if you still need a beta- I'd love to do it! And I promise to be honest :) I like the pace of Lily and James' relationship and I especially love how natural they are together. It's really very good :)