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11/21/2008 c6 2agent1332
ROTFLOL! I burst out with laughter when KITT interrupted them. It took me 5 minutes to calm down enough to finish the chapter. That was great.

I am surprised he didn't do that in 'I Wanna Rock and Roll All Knight' after they ended the kiss when the cop walked away with a smirk on his face.

can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work.
11/12/2008 c5 goveritas
Another great chapter! Sarah completed her mission. Whew! Although that seemed a bit too easy. Are things going to go wrong before she gets back? And Mike is back to the nice guy we know and love...and he and Sarah have a date. Hooray! Love the dialogue as I can "hear" each of the characters very well. Please update soon. Real life can wait right? Who needs to work for money? :)
11/9/2008 c5 3SeeleyDeanDinozzo
another great chapter poor mike having to play halo with billy ha ha and mike being pissed of last chapter when he found out sarah was with kitt typical male thinking woman can't do a mans job ha ha.

can't wait for the next chapter update again soon
11/8/2008 c5 shirik
i loved the dialog between kitt and mike at night- it was lovely!

as for "cold stone" sara- she didn't even ask how is mike doing...

is she hurt? how could kitt didn't notice?
11/6/2008 c4 goveritas
Oh the angst! The scene of Mike finding out about Sarah's mission was perfect. Mike was so mad but we all know that it is just because he cares. :) The converstation between Kitt and Sarah was humorous and touching at the same time. Gender differences happen even between people and AIs! Will Sarah be able to complete her mission? Will Mike have to rescue her? (I hope so!) Can't wait to find out what happens. Write faster please!
11/6/2008 c4 shirik
the way mike is worried is exactly what i ment! i wish sara will not be so hard head thinking it's because he is egoistic- it's because he really loved her!

i loved this chapter and i wish mike will feel better so he can bring her back or save her somehow before she'll get killed ...

tnx again!looking for more soon hopefully
11/6/2008 c4 11AbsolutAnda
Well, according to Wallace and Gromit, the moon IS made of cheese...hmm...

Still love it. Great job. The characters are very believable. You've done a good job with that. Some of them are a bit tough.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
11/6/2008 c4 23anyabar1987
do I need to review? *teases*

Story is still going great like I told you in email haha

Can't wait to see the next chapter -_-

(if you didn't guess I am in a teasing mood)
11/6/2008 c3 shirik
i would hope to see a more concurned sara over mike...
11/6/2008 c2 shirik
i think it's an awesome start! very intense and i love mike specially wounded ...

tnx
11/2/2008 c3 3SeeleyDeanDinozzo
another great chapter lets see how sarah likes mikes job .

can't wait for next chapter update again soon.

how many chapters will this stoey be.
11/1/2008 c3 goveritas
Terrific story! There's plot, action, history, strong male and female leads, interation with KITT, and romance! What's there not to love? Please post soon...
11/1/2008 c3 5CindyT63
please please please please - with all that GREAT build up, please add a chapter 2.5! Skipping to 5 days later is cheating the reader! You've set up some great drama/angst/hurt-comfort opportunities getting Mike to the hospital, etc. Please write chapter 2-1/2 and fill in the blanks!
11/1/2008 c3 23anyabar1987
as I told you before I really love this chapter.

scenes with little action are good to help set the pace of the story and develop the characters that extra piece and show what they are like when they aren't having to fight for their lives

I really like how Torres doesn't suspect that KITT listens to his conversations. he does this in the show as well and I wonder how intelligent he actually thinks KITT is.
10/30/2008 c1 2Someone-Anonymous12345
Great story!I can't wait to read more of it! :D
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