for Friendships Survies Everything7/16/2014 c50 Jon Voris
*I* *LOVED* *THIS* *TO* *DEATH* !
One Of Thee *BEST* Suite Life FanFic's I've Ever Read !
That Said, 150/5 Stars ;)
*I* *LOVED* *THIS* *TO* *DEATH* !
One Of Thee *BEST* Suite Life FanFic's I've Ever Read !
That Said, 150/5 Stars ;)
6/3/2013 c3 Penelope Simions
Aww I'll never leave you either I don't want to think about what might of happened to London And Maddie But With You alive and healthy I know I have someone I can turn to I love you good story
Aww I'll never leave you either I don't want to think about what might of happened to London And Maddie But With You alive and healthy I know I have someone I can turn to I love you good story
7/4/2010 c35 
71tiger002
Okay, I think that's enough of one story for the night, I'll be back soon to read the rest. It does feel like it's dragging along too much in parts, but with so much that needs to happen, it makes sense. I'm curious what the letters are and great job with this story.
71tiger002Okay, I think that's enough of one story for the night, I'll be back soon to read the rest. It does feel like it's dragging along too much in parts, but with so much that needs to happen, it makes sense. I'm curious what the letters are and great job with this story.
7/4/2010 c31 tiger002
Great chapter, no surprise that Cody exploded on them like that, nor that Zack was there to comfort him.
Great chapter, no surprise that Cody exploded on them like that, nor that Zack was there to comfort him.
7/4/2010 c28 tiger002
Yep, brining a character just to kill them is evil, but makes for a good story. This is really getting good again.
Yep, brining a character just to kill them is evil, but makes for a good story. This is really getting good again.
7/4/2010 c25 tiger002
Well that's one way to shake things up. What all has Zack forgotten, is his bond with Cody the only thing that made him remember his brother, or did he just forget a few things?
Well that's one way to shake things up. What all has Zack forgotten, is his bond with Cody the only thing that made him remember his brother, or did he just forget a few things?
7/4/2010 c24 tiger002
Yay he's awake! Great job with that scene at the end and building up to Zack waking up with Cody next to him. That was awesome!
Yay he's awake! Great job with that scene at the end and building up to Zack waking up with Cody next to him. That was awesome!
7/4/2010 c23 tiger002
One complaint I have about this past several chapters is the lack of word variety, mainly in using people's names. It keeps jarring to see the same word used over and over, and while this is a good story, it's making it hard to read.
One complaint I have about this past several chapters is the lack of word variety, mainly in using people's names. It keeps jarring to see the same word used over and over, and while this is a good story, it's making it hard to read.
7/4/2010 c16 tiger002
Just when I thought things might end without any more death, you scare me with something like that. Time to read more...
Just when I thought things might end without any more death, you scare me with something like that. Time to read more...
6/5/2010 c9 6owlhero
heartbreaking story so far with all the death and destruction. I love the emotional connections between the characters. You are a very good writer. Keep it up. I am sad that you killed London off but in this story somebody had to die to have an emotional connection to the story.
6owlheroheartbreaking story so far with all the death and destruction. I love the emotional connections between the characters. You are a very good writer. Keep it up. I am sad that you killed London off but in this story somebody had to die to have an emotional connection to the story.
6/3/2010 c15 71tiger002
Sorry for taking so long to read, this isn't just a story I can pick up read a chapter, and go on. It seems like things are calming down now, but Zack's still not safe yet, and you seem like you might kill him still. I've noticed with the past few chapters a number of grammer mistakes, and you could use more variety especially with naming the characters. However, since this is your first story, I'm sure you've learned how to fix these mistakes.
71tiger002Sorry for taking so long to read, this isn't just a story I can pick up read a chapter, and go on. It seems like things are calming down now, but Zack's still not safe yet, and you seem like you might kill him still. I've noticed with the past few chapters a number of grammer mistakes, and you could use more variety especially with naming the characters. However, since this is your first story, I'm sure you've learned how to fix these mistakes.
6/3/2010 c12 tiger002
I can see Moseby turning to drinking after something like that. I doubt he drinks often, but when something like that happens, he'd' want to do anything to drown the pain
I can see Moseby turning to drinking after something like that. I doubt he drinks often, but when something like that happens, he'd' want to do anything to drown the pain
5/10/2010 c10 tiger002
Wow, this is one of the few stories to make me cry. Everything seems so realistic, I don't know if the twins will live or not, or if something else will go wrong. Great chapter and I plan to read more tomorrow.
Wow, this is one of the few stories to make me cry. Everything seems so realistic, I don't know if the twins will live or not, or if something else will go wrong. Great chapter and I plan to read more tomorrow.
5/10/2010 c9 tiger002
Oh man, I could see Carey's pain at seeing Zack like that and then seeing Cody...wow.
Oh man, I could see Carey's pain at seeing Zack like that and then seeing Cody...wow.