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11/29/2016 c2 AnimexFreakz 0.o
Awwww, or she could just stay there and be his queen. Like, forever! Thanks for writing!
-kitty
7/23/2012 c2 omg
awful just awful...
6/21/2012 c2 13serenityrain2233
short and sweet
10/29/2010 c1 Katie
This is sad! why did she have to go! I haven't read escaflowne but seriously couldn't she stay with HER kid :) argh but its good in a depressing way :D
7/28/2010 c1 puma1sunfire
interesting story
6/20/2010 c1 1Yujiro101
its a sad one...is van the father? is he gonna get married? why can't hitomi just stay there with them...theres a lot of questions in this story...maybe you need a sequel? and if you do have one can u send me a link to it? thank you.
8/15/2009 c1 3The Black Sheep Juri
this was so beautiful! i really enjoyed it.

inupupby5
6/27/2009 c1 the dream will end with me
SO . . . . Did she leave the kid? Did she leave? Did she stay? What sis she do!
11/28/2008 c1 2shinakimi
are u gonna write another chapter plz it about hitomi staying i want her to stay plz plz plz plz
11/22/2008 c1 10I.Think.Im.In.Wonderland
wow... Hitomi seems... a little cold... i mean who could give a baby up that easily... who was the father? i assume it was Van but you never know... But i guess thats my opinion, your story in its self was really good, but tere was so much mre you could have added. This has a potential to be an amazing story. Anyway nice job.

tear x
11/3/2008 c1 Lady Rini
I really liked the ending it was really cute!
10/29/2008 c1 7Lil' Dinky
Interesting. But... a little strange... why wouldn't Van have asked to marry her? Or was he worried it wasn't his kid? Or... was it simply because he knew she wanted to go back to Earth? Though she did give up her baby a little easily. Although- she couldn't really take him back to Earth with her, being as she's only at oldest 16...

Good first story, though. Is this a one-shot or will you keep going with it?
10/29/2008 c1 110VampireApple
Aw, this was so cute! Very good for your first fanfic.
10/29/2008 c1 13serenityrain2233
ah you kinda skipped a lot here dont you think...

i mean there was like nine months worth of stuff to go through and how could hitomi just leave her son behind like that and i think van should have offered to marry her... not ask just to keep the child that was insensitive dont you think...

other than that i really liked it i'm just wondering now where you are going with this story i puzzled... so update aagain soon bye now...

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