
4/21/2011 c9
38Mrs-N-Uzumaki
NOOOOOOO! You just CAN'T leave your story there! Please please please please please come back to it!

NOOOOOOO! You just CAN'T leave your story there! Please please please please please come back to it!
4/21/2011 c4 Mrs-N-Uzumaki
This is good. REALLY good. You have set out a well-thought out and engaging plotline, with by far brilliant characterisation and excellent use of writing!
Now if you excuse me, I shall continue reading on (even tho' I should really be sleeping...)
This is good. REALLY good. You have set out a well-thought out and engaging plotline, with by far brilliant characterisation and excellent use of writing!
Now if you excuse me, I shall continue reading on (even tho' I should really be sleeping...)
2/15/2009 c9 Lexicon
What a cruel place to abandon the story... this premise has a lot of promise. Hope you decide to continue.
What a cruel place to abandon the story... this premise has a lot of promise. Hope you decide to continue.
12/21/2008 c9 Harlequin Jade
Woo! Okay, now I definitely need to read more. Update again soon please!
Woo! Okay, now I definitely need to read more. Update again soon please!
12/3/2008 c9 mit
keep going
loving the drama
keep going
loving the drama
12/3/2008 c9
8bexr91
I really like the story, I think its realistic, especially to Jackson's character, as personally, I don't believe he would go back for revenge that is common in many stories.It's not him.
I like how you've unconcsiously made it as her going to him instead,a 'coincidence', it makes a pleasant difference. Im looking forward to reading the rest and the histories behind Jackson and other characters.
great writing :)
P.S. I hope her Dad is OK...

I really like the story, I think its realistic, especially to Jackson's character, as personally, I don't believe he would go back for revenge that is common in many stories.It's not him.
I like how you've unconcsiously made it as her going to him instead,a 'coincidence', it makes a pleasant difference. Im looking forward to reading the rest and the histories behind Jackson and other characters.
great writing :)
P.S. I hope her Dad is OK...