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6/28/2020 c1 4YaleAceBella12
Please write more.
7/7/2012 c1 sfbxfcb
Wonderful!
6/30/2009 c1 22S.Nova17
Aww that was so sweet :) I loved it.
1/27/2009 c1 Beth
Well, I think it's cute. But I think you might've stayed a little too close to the lyrics- next time, use the general idea, but have a story that just associates with them, not mimics them. Also, I've just got to say- that machine would have cut Lizzie off about six times. :-) That could've added some comic relief.
11/7/2008 c1 5Don-Jam
I Like this song, It got my thinking aboyt how My and Sister "used to play, Barbie dolls and make-up, Tea parties dress up"...(But I'm a Boy...so Not a good thing, I think.lol)

Casey Venturi? Well we ALL KNOW how she get that name do we not? Who is Lizzie boy?(Is it Edwin? That my Lizwin obsessed mind at work.)

I Like what yoy did weth this, Thank You.
11/3/2008 c1 2Wepluvzyou
aw... Loved it and did i notice a hint of Dasey?
11/2/2008 c1 39bundyshoes
this was really well written! Lizzie's has grown so much!^^ um, i was wondering, just out of curiostiy, since it said 'Casey Venturi' is she married to Derek? i was just wondering ifit was true, or my Dasey-obsessed mind is playing tricks on me.hehe, great story tho...:D

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