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12/6/2008 c9 random
i love your story, pls update soon! i know oyu get this alot but you are a very skilled writer!
12/6/2008 c9 kouga's older woman
YAY! They are in the same town!
12/5/2008 c9 12WhiteStars
Nice chapter

I really liked how Hiten likes Kagome

I've always thought that Hiten and Bankotsu kind of looked alike

Right?

They both have ebony-black hair tied in a braid and the same tan skin

I'm just saying

Anyway, good job

Update soon
12/5/2008 c9 blue martini
now i bet you are all confused because i asked you to delete all my not sighned in reviews,.. well here, i reviewed again, and signed in this time, to make it un-deletable and official! i just really love this fic!

that was,...- a diabolical cliff hanger! your gonna make me cry.. too late -cries-

update soon! pls, i'm begging you!
12/5/2008 c8 blue martini
wat? HITEN! oh god! ur story has all the sexy men! it's the best banKag fic ever... update soon! I agree with brookeylynn, best story ever!
12/5/2008 c7 blue martini
haha turtle! that was,.. unexpected,.. i love your story, again...

i hope they meet up, and JakXsan is great!

update soon! and i MEAN soon! haha,. i'm too controlling, sorry...

update soon! love it!
12/5/2008 c6 blue martini
ey kagome! Kicks a** she should kick Inu's a** to hell! just an opinion...

haha, nanami, midoriko and tsubaki are their ancestors! haha what a twist.. it goes like this ryt...

Ban-nnami (oc? ryt? i never saw her in the anime.)

Kag- midoriko (not a surprise but still great!)

Kyou- tsubaki ( wat they don't look the same, but i bet you'll do something awesome to make it good!)

your so great! i love ur story!
12/5/2008 c5 blue martini
hey! from the way you describe kyou! for me he looks like Aidou Hanabusa from Vampire knight! thats where you got him ryt? cause i saw ur prof and you like aidou! but bankotsu is still hotter!

wow sango is a mess!

this made me laugh soo hard!

Then, finally panic hit him, hard.. anyone who could see his face would immediately see through his head and see exactly what he is thinking..

“Kagome I'm coming!” he shouted out loud like a crazy man and stood up, just when he was going to make a run for it..

haha! that was fabulous! i love it! all of it!
12/5/2008 c4 blue martini
hell yeah! of courz Bankotsu beats inuyasha in absolutely everything! haha! poor sango,.. i hope she gets a happy life too, it made me tingle when you put in the stuff about how bankotsu feels and how he was soo confused! it made me cry, literally.
12/5/2008 c3 blue martini
oh no Bankotsu is gonna lose her! noo! wow He actually slapped her back, your soo right! Kagome is not getting over this! no way in hell! but she has to ryt! you knw, for the happy ending?

i love you story! by the way! great outfit! ipictured it in my mind and it was sexy!
12/5/2008 c2 blue martini
haha! so, your gonna make this fic where Jakotsu and Kagome get along, that's a first! poor kagome, Bankotsu is becoming an ass! but a sexy ass at that!

thankz for your Perfct story! i love it so much
12/5/2008 c1 blue martini
i love your story! so i decided to review on all the chapters! kikyo should really die! love your story oh so much! i love it i love it! great beginning by the way.
12/5/2008 c1 kagie
booho... i'm crying my ass off here,. why oh why did you end it in a cliffy...WHY!

i still love it, update soon pls.. *continues to cry*
12/5/2008 c1 crying lady
update soon... unbelievable chapter! i'm in awe of you
12/5/2008 c9 White Princess Kia
delicious chapter, as expected from YOU! your great! i'm ur #1 fan and anyone else who says that will die, i'm the most devoted!

oh yeah and evil cliffy!

update soon
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