for Things That Haunt Us4/4/2009 c2 
7sprinkledwithpearls
I like it but i'm kind of confused.
Was that part at the end a memory?
So now she doesn't have Jasper, in present time?
Sorry i cant keep up (:
It seems really good, i'm just confused.
7sprinkledwithpearlsI like it but i'm kind of confused.
Was that part at the end a memory?
So now she doesn't have Jasper, in present time?
Sorry i cant keep up (:
It seems really good, i'm just confused.
11/14/2008 c2 22Ember Sage
This is really good! I kind of wish you would have told us what had happened after the lights in the ampitheatre went on... but I'm guessing you'll tell us eventually. Great job, I'm really enjoying this, can't wait for an update! :D
-Ember
22Ember SageThis is really good! I kind of wish you would have told us what had happened after the lights in the ampitheatre went on... but I'm guessing you'll tell us eventually. Great job, I'm really enjoying this, can't wait for an update! :D
-Ember
11/13/2008 c2 VoldieBeth
So Jasper was kidnapped when they were in the woods? Hmm... are you going to make it another flashback to flesh out that part of the story?
Other than that little confusion, I like the story so far. Alice's heart condition seems extreme but fine with the point you are trying to get across. I can't wait for more!
So Jasper was kidnapped when they were in the woods? Hmm... are you going to make it another flashback to flesh out that part of the story?
Other than that little confusion, I like the story so far. Alice's heart condition seems extreme but fine with the point you are trying to get across. I can't wait for more!
11/5/2008 c1 8Lily Turwaithiel
I love it so far!
I can't wait to read the rest. And I really hope Jasper doesn't get shot, but I'm pretty sure that's what's going to happen...
I have to go to bed because it's so late here, but I'll read the rest tomorrow. Promise!
From now YOUR favorite reviewer XD
-LT
8Lily TurwaithielI love it so far!
I can't wait to read the rest. And I really hope Jasper doesn't get shot, but I'm pretty sure that's what's going to happen...
I have to go to bed because it's so late here, but I'll read the rest tomorrow. Promise!
From now YOUR favorite reviewer XD
-LT
11/4/2008 c1 Apple Slushie
this was really good.
the beginning was great but that as a surprise at the end. the guys still there isn't he, he'll pop out and BAM! I'm going to have a shower for speech night now and i dont say a speech i'm just watching great idea
this was really good.
the beginning was great but that as a surprise at the end. the guys still there isn't he, he'll pop out and BAM! I'm going to have a shower for speech night now and i dont say a speech i'm just watching great idea
11/4/2008 c1 VoldieBeth
Oh, interesting story. Please continue, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Oh, interesting story. Please continue, I can't wait to see what happens next.