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12/31/2018 c1 Latenightstoryteller
This is a great story, I love the originality, humour and the plot itself. You truly are an author with great potential. My only advice is to remember to give plenty of details, to describe anything and everything the characters feel, touch, smell, see etc. It will help your readers form bonds, and truly experience the adventures you tell.

Yes, I know, I struggle to do so myself, but believe me it helps. Please understand I mean in no disrespect, I only wish to help you.

Well done, keep up the good work!
10/8/2010 c20 3CrimsonMoon2009
Awsome will there be a sequal.
9/19/2009 c20 StarSwoop
good story, sequel?
9/8/2009 c20 2Emi Takahashi
is threre going to be a sequil
9/7/2009 c20 29Northwest Sage
Nice little wrap-up to a fun and enjoyable story!
9/7/2009 c20 6Carter547
Awa! Man! Oh well. THis was awesome! I really liked it! Wooh!
9/6/2009 c19 StarSwoop
poor tc
8/26/2009 c19 29Northwest Sage
Interesting... I look forward to seeing how you end this one!
8/25/2009 c19 6Carter547
Uh Oh. O_o not good! XD
8/25/2009 c19 2Emi Takahashi
optimus is sometimes worser than ratchet
8/16/2009 c18 StarSwoop
lol
8/15/2009 c18 Emi Takahashi
Will Lisa have a mate
7/24/2009 c17 random rainbow
this is really good! hurry up and get the next chapter up! good luck writing
7/24/2009 c17 StarSwoop
wheeljack!
7/3/2009 c17 6Carter547
Awz
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