for Many Loves Found: Ikarishipping10/12/2016 c9 Guest
Hi include a new reviewer I love your story so much I read it every day it's bueatiful! I know this was listed in 2010 and it's 2017 almost but hey keep writing don't give up your stories are amazing...
Hi include a new reviewer I love your story so much I read it every day it's bueatiful! I know this was listed in 2010 and it's 2017 almost but hey keep writing don't give up your stories are amazing...
8/26/2012 c13 Guest
J is a girl!
J is a girl!
7/10/2010 c1 
3Mustang-Luver-101
This is a good chapter and stuff, but this one thing that I caught is when you have the characters talk, you go like this...
Dawn : are you okay?
but in reality it is supposed to go like this. ("Paul are you okay?" Dawn asked)
(Sorry, needed an example to show you Dialouge:)
Other than that tiny thing, your story is awesome, and I love it so far:D
3Mustang-Luver-101This is a good chapter and stuff, but this one thing that I caught is when you have the characters talk, you go like this...
Dawn : are you okay?
but in reality it is supposed to go like this. ("Paul are you okay?" Dawn asked)
(Sorry, needed an example to show you Dialouge:)
Other than that tiny thing, your story is awesome, and I love it so far:D
6/19/2010 c10 4Checkered Brooke
ooh was it celibi? It's so hard imagining Paul laugh if you've seen the series... GO IKARISHIPPING
4Checkered Brookeooh was it celibi? It's so hard imagining Paul laugh if you've seen the series... GO IKARISHIPPING
4/12/2010 c17 22DGMSilverAirHead03
If there are more chapters than why is the story complete? Oh well, i loved this story!
22DGMSilverAirHead03If there are more chapters than why is the story complete? Oh well, i loved this story!
4/12/2010 c17 8HeadMageMai
Good job! Its great and certainly...a total
ikarishippie~!:)
Nice man!
THNX,pokemon13~!
PS, I'm a GIRL! DO NOT expect me to be a BOY!
BYE!
CONTINUE ON TOO!
8HeadMageMaiGood job! Its great and certainly...a total
ikarishippie~!:)
Nice man!
THNX,pokemon13~!
PS, I'm a GIRL! DO NOT expect me to be a BOY!
BYE!
CONTINUE ON TOO!
4/10/2010 c17 3Ookami-Lover
to bad its over anyway update your other shipping stories like this soon! :) and great ending chapter!
3Ookami-Loverto bad its over anyway update your other shipping stories like this soon! :) and great ending chapter!
1/17/2010 c7 mednin
It seems like this guy has them in the palm of his hands. Nice battle description.
It seems like this guy has them in the palm of his hands. Nice battle description.
1/17/2010 c4 mednin
Paul is being such a jerk! Then again, he is in character, good job, he's HARD to keep in character.
Paul is being such a jerk! Then again, he is in character, good job, he's HARD to keep in character.
1/17/2010 c3 mednin
Keys? I think that maybe Mundo should be Dawn's father in disguise or something if you ever need to add more drama.
Keys? I think that maybe Mundo should be Dawn's father in disguise or something if you ever need to add more drama.
1/17/2010 c2 mednin
Don't listen to him, Dawn! Anyways, good chapter, I'm going to keep on reviewing! ^^
Don't listen to him, Dawn! Anyways, good chapter, I'm going to keep on reviewing! ^^