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11/13/2008 c1 8bookwrangler
RS - Great to see you back. The indecision and tension were woven terrifically through this piece. The rise in pitch, cressendo and reduction was well played. I can't pick out the lines I liked the best, I'd be rewriting most of the piece. I hope to see more from you soon. Thank you. -B
11/6/2008 c1 10Catty
Poor Lindsay - so unsure, so disbelieving.

Great story. I just want to give her a hug and then knock some sense into her!

Thanks for posting.

C
11/5/2008 c1 16paradiso
Nice. I'm usually not a big fan of Danny or Lindsay or Danny/Lindsay, but it works here. You did a good job of showcasing the insecurities tied to her character. Flawless spelling and grammar, I hope you'll write more stuff for NY.

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