for Advantages5/11/2010 c1 
14Emerald Gaze
haha nice!
i like how naruto ends up being the one with the real advantage
very nice lemon by the way, and it was only ur second?
p-shaw! i dont believe that!
very cool story!^_^!
14Emerald Gazehaha nice!
i like how naruto ends up being the one with the real advantage
very nice lemon by the way, and it was only ur second?
p-shaw! i dont believe that!
very cool story!^_^!
12/14/2009 c1 7Housenka
loved it! amazingly done-you got sasuke and naruto's relationship right on! really amazing job!
7Housenkaloved it! amazingly done-you got sasuke and naruto's relationship right on! really amazing job!
10/1/2009 c1 8Sesshysgirl06
I really liked this story. Especially the ending. I hope there is some type of sequel to this. Is there?
8Sesshysgirl06I really liked this story. Especially the ending. I hope there is some type of sequel to this. Is there?
4/2/2009 c1 10necessarily-anonymous
woah! i really liked this. i usually dont like SasuNaru fics because authors tend to make Naruto into a whiny little 8 year old girl instead of keeping him in character. but you did a really really good job! :heart:
10necessarily-anonymouswoah! i really liked this. i usually dont like SasuNaru fics because authors tend to make Naruto into a whiny little 8 year old girl instead of keeping him in character. but you did a really really good job! :heart:
2/15/2009 c1 5cleo21
i love the way you wrote this and i loved the ending
also, the lemon part was very sexy
love it!
5cleo21i love the way you wrote this and i loved the ending
also, the lemon part was very sexy
love it!
11/21/2008 c1 3xbabylolitax
first off: absolute gold! i really love how you presented sasuke and naruto - they were really well done. secondly i think ur lying wen u say that this is ur second lemon... coz it is WAY too good to be anything less. also i loved the end, when sasuke took the hitai-ite and placed it over his heart... im still grinning like an idiot (like naruto when he gets ramen! ;)) over it.
3xbabylolitaxfirst off: absolute gold! i really love how you presented sasuke and naruto - they were really well done. secondly i think ur lying wen u say that this is ur second lemon... coz it is WAY too good to be anything less. also i loved the end, when sasuke took the hitai-ite and placed it over his heart... im still grinning like an idiot (like naruto when he gets ramen! ;)) over it.
11/17/2008 c1 anon
woah! loved it! too bad its a one-shot
woah! loved it! too bad its a one-shot
11/16/2008 c1 20VolumeofForgottenLore
I really liked this fiction. I cracked up when Sasuke put the collar on Naruto. It was perfect. I like the title of the story and the last line "He had the advantage" as well. :D
20VolumeofForgottenLoreI really liked this fiction. I cracked up when Sasuke put the collar on Naruto. It was perfect. I like the title of the story and the last line "He had the advantage" as well. :D
11/13/2008 c1 8Sweetness Theory
I praise you for your talent for writing this piece of gem. I'd not have enough patience to make it so long (kudos for that).
Loved the fight scenes (I can't write them for shit), the hitai-ate kept over the hart (implying more than it meets the eye) and above everything else, this:
"Sasuke’s hand silently rose to his chest and pressed into the cloth of his shirt that rested above his heart. Something metal had been placed there, the impression of a spiral-leaf with a gash across it pressed into his fingers." - Brilliant. It speaks volumes about transcending feelings of their never breaking bond, of acceptance and of embedding and locking it within their heart, even if they're unspoken.
It's a pity, though, that the leash was unhooked. I'd love to see Naruto explaining his new change in 'attire the rest of the people.
I get this feeling that Naruto forgot about his teammates waiting for the back-up to take them back home. His priorities sucks: he needs a bath, maybe catch some sleep in the inn (because of the tiresome journey), eat some ramen, lol. And I think his attention span to the rest-of-the world shortens, when he spots/sees Sasuke. Then he's all in the 'Sasuke mode' and nothing else matters XD
I never fail to write long comments. Sorry for that.
+fav
Sweetness Theory
8Sweetness TheoryI praise you for your talent for writing this piece of gem. I'd not have enough patience to make it so long (kudos for that).
Loved the fight scenes (I can't write them for shit), the hitai-ate kept over the hart (implying more than it meets the eye) and above everything else, this:
"Sasuke’s hand silently rose to his chest and pressed into the cloth of his shirt that rested above his heart. Something metal had been placed there, the impression of a spiral-leaf with a gash across it pressed into his fingers." - Brilliant. It speaks volumes about transcending feelings of their never breaking bond, of acceptance and of embedding and locking it within their heart, even if they're unspoken.
It's a pity, though, that the leash was unhooked. I'd love to see Naruto explaining his new change in 'attire the rest of the people.
I get this feeling that Naruto forgot about his teammates waiting for the back-up to take them back home. His priorities sucks: he needs a bath, maybe catch some sleep in the inn (because of the tiresome journey), eat some ramen, lol. And I think his attention span to the rest-of-the world shortens, when he spots/sees Sasuke. Then he's all in the 'Sasuke mode' and nothing else matters XD
I never fail to write long comments. Sorry for that.
+fav
Sweetness Theory
11/13/2008 c1 1Sake-Chama
This Oneshot was really good I don't understand why you dont have many reviews. It was very heart warming.
1Sake-ChamaThis Oneshot was really good I don't understand why you dont have many reviews. It was very heart warming.