
7/21/2013 c1 Guest
This is so sad! The poor she-kit
This is so sad! The poor she-kit
1/1/2009 c1
1LostInThoughtOxo
I almost cried! The poor kit. I wishe she'd lived.
I liked the little poemy bit! :)

I almost cried! The poor kit. I wishe she'd lived.
I liked the little poemy bit! :)
11/12/2008 c1
16AkumuKitty9797
oh. . . that was so sad! it was good but. . .*sniff* SAD.
*AK*
Go Super Donut Powers!

oh. . . that was so sad! it was good but. . .*sniff* SAD.
*AK*
Go Super Donut Powers!
11/7/2008 c1 Virtuous Wanderer
Wow... Uh, is it alright if I didn't like it? The thing that I enjoyed when I read this was your improved grammar, keep it up. But I would encourage more editing, better names, and a little more descriptions.
Yours truly~
-Hawk
Wow... Uh, is it alright if I didn't like it? The thing that I enjoyed when I read this was your improved grammar, keep it up. But I would encourage more editing, better names, and a little more descriptions.
Yours truly~
-Hawk
11/7/2008 c1
5String of Pearly
I love it! It's so sad, though : ( Poor kit! Anyway, great job!
~Pearly

I love it! It's so sad, though : ( Poor kit! Anyway, great job!
~Pearly