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6/13/2019 c1 Amy
8/29/2017 c1 1Oriana Star
Amazing story! I love this couple!
8/10/2012 c1 25Sorceress of Magic
11/10/2010 c1 32Dark-Supernatural-Angel
Nicely done, glad it ended on a good note for Casey and Derek =D
2/15/2010 c1 3EscapeSomeday
AW! that was PERFECT! lovely... amazing... :D
9/17/2009 c1 7S.H. Briggs
If he gets a cold from her, they'll make out through that, too! haha.
8/26/2009 c1 misanfaery
Perfect, absolutely wonderful.

3/31/2009 c1 8AngelOfDeath07
Of course I had to review! I really shouldnt cause I'm supposed to do work (again) but hey it was a great little one-shot

I liked how they would suddenly just stop talking and just stare at eachother longingly (spelling?) very realistic and i liked how she wasnt afraid to kiss him first!

Again good job :)

2/4/2009 c1 13BlackStar29
i really enjoyed the third person view i have a hard time writing like that and you do it really well! cute a fluffy
11/26/2008 c1 5outlinedsilver
Amazing :D
11/16/2008 c1 4pheobe d
yay! and that was not really just fluff - it was a lovely story!

(except for the germ part at the end - yuck)

But I loved, loved that he got her invited to the party without her finding out and then didn't have fun without her.

:) pheobe
11/14/2008 c1 17unoriginal-elizabeth
This is just so sweet - and solid at the same time, if that makes sense. Like, it's not goes at this steady pace, which I really like, because as a reader, every time Derek and Casey got caught in a moment and stared at each other, I wasn't thinking 'Oh, for goodness sake - kiss!' I was enjoying the an-ti-ci-pa-tion (I kind of think Derek and Casey were too). Like - you know you're going to get there eventually, and it's going to be spectacular...but the getting there has its own kind of charm, and you want to wring every last bit of enjoyment out of that, too :)

Condensed, saner version goes something like: "This is lovely" :)

(Also - go productive you!)
11/10/2008 c1 10doornumberthree
That was fantastic. Very real, very amusing, but still very intense. I loved the quirky bits- the rollercoaster of germ fun, etc. I do think however, that the ending would have been much more powerful if you had left it at "The inarticulate sounds... etc". Anyway, this was great!
11/10/2008 c1 9LindsaylovesPacey
I liked it, it was really short and to the point in a way that explained all the years of frustration and kindly arguing. They really are hot for each other, if only the writers of the show saw it our way...
11/9/2008 c1 3country-till-I-die
ilike the germ ride reference lol made me laugh. such a cute story!
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