for Inarticulate6/13/2019 c1 Amy
Adorable.
Adorable.
11/10/2010 c1 
32Dark-Supernatural-Angel
Nicely done, glad it ended on a good note for Casey and Derek =D
32Dark-Supernatural-AngelNicely done, glad it ended on a good note for Casey and Derek =D
3/31/2009 c1 8AngelOfDeath07
Of course I had to review! I really shouldnt cause I'm supposed to do work (again) but hey it was a great little one-shot
I liked how they would suddenly just stop talking and just stare at eachother longingly (spelling?) very realistic and i liked how she wasnt afraid to kiss him first!
Again good job :)
Deanie
8AngelOfDeath07Of course I had to review! I really shouldnt cause I'm supposed to do work (again) but hey it was a great little one-shot
I liked how they would suddenly just stop talking and just stare at eachother longingly (spelling?) very realistic and i liked how she wasnt afraid to kiss him first!
Again good job :)
Deanie
2/4/2009 c1 13BlackStar29
i really enjoyed the third person view i have a hard time writing like that and you do it really well! cute a fluffy
13BlackStar29i really enjoyed the third person view i have a hard time writing like that and you do it really well! cute a fluffy
11/16/2008 c1 4pheobe d
yay! and that was not really just fluff - it was a lovely story!
(except for the germ part at the end - yuck)
But I loved, loved that he got her invited to the party without her finding out and then didn't have fun without her.
:) pheobe
4pheobe dyay! and that was not really just fluff - it was a lovely story!
(except for the germ part at the end - yuck)
But I loved, loved that he got her invited to the party without her finding out and then didn't have fun without her.
:) pheobe
11/14/2008 c1 17unoriginal-elizabeth
This is just so sweet - and solid at the same time, if that makes sense. Like, it's not hyper-fluff...it goes at this steady pace, which I really like, because as a reader, every time Derek and Casey got caught in a moment and stared at each other, I wasn't thinking 'Oh, for goodness sake - kiss!' I was enjoying the an-ti-ci-pa-tion (I kind of think Derek and Casey were too). Like - you know you're going to get there eventually, and it's going to be spectacular...but the getting there has its own kind of charm, and you want to wring every last bit of enjoyment out of that, too :)
Condensed, saner version goes something like: "This is lovely" :)
(Also - go productive you!)
17unoriginal-elizabethThis is just so sweet - and solid at the same time, if that makes sense. Like, it's not hyper-fluff...it goes at this steady pace, which I really like, because as a reader, every time Derek and Casey got caught in a moment and stared at each other, I wasn't thinking 'Oh, for goodness sake - kiss!' I was enjoying the an-ti-ci-pa-tion (I kind of think Derek and Casey were too). Like - you know you're going to get there eventually, and it's going to be spectacular...but the getting there has its own kind of charm, and you want to wring every last bit of enjoyment out of that, too :)
Condensed, saner version goes something like: "This is lovely" :)
(Also - go productive you!)
11/10/2008 c1 10doornumberthree
That was fantastic. Very real, very amusing, but still very intense. I loved the quirky bits- the rollercoaster of germ fun, etc. I do think however, that the ending would have been much more powerful if you had left it at "The inarticulate sounds... etc". Anyway, this was great!
10doornumberthreeThat was fantastic. Very real, very amusing, but still very intense. I loved the quirky bits- the rollercoaster of germ fun, etc. I do think however, that the ending would have been much more powerful if you had left it at "The inarticulate sounds... etc". Anyway, this was great!
11/10/2008 c1 9LindsaylovesPacey
I liked it, it was really short and to the point in a way that explained all the years of frustration and kindly arguing. They really are hot for each other, if only the writers of the show saw it our way...
9LindsaylovesPaceyI liked it, it was really short and to the point in a way that explained all the years of frustration and kindly arguing. They really are hot for each other, if only the writers of the show saw it our way...