for Hinata's List1/3/2015 c1 derek
this is a great story what would naruto do if he found out thjast he has his own fangirl
this is a great story what would naruto do if he found out thjast he has his own fangirl
1/25/2013 c1 
3Ai Akira
Some of the things 'stolen' where understandable but seriously, blood and urine. That's just gross. But if you feel it spices up the story then okay... besides that it was interesting.
3Ai AkiraSome of the things 'stolen' where understandable but seriously, blood and urine. That's just gross. But if you feel it spices up the story then okay... besides that it was interesting.
12/20/2010 c1 raingirl777
This story wasn't very interesting. I wanted to see romance, not this crap. And whats up with her having his blood and urine. Thats just nasty. I do understand a lock of his hair though. You know maybe she just wanted somthing to remind her of his scent.
-raingirl777
This story wasn't very interesting. I wanted to see romance, not this crap. And whats up with her having his blood and urine. Thats just nasty. I do understand a lock of his hair though. You know maybe she just wanted somthing to remind her of his scent.
-raingirl777
9/5/2010 c1 6YumeKioko
The storys umm very interesting. Here it seems you turnerd Hinata into a stalker beause only a stalker would want Naruto's umm urine. Hahaha but it's most ceratinly very funny I nearly laughed my butt off. But I think the whole blood and Urine was taking it a bit far. But if thats the kind of effect you were going for you succeded. Keep on writing and I hope you didn't mind my critiqing.
6YumeKiokoThe storys umm very interesting. Here it seems you turnerd Hinata into a stalker beause only a stalker would want Naruto's umm urine. Hahaha but it's most ceratinly very funny I nearly laughed my butt off. But I think the whole blood and Urine was taking it a bit far. But if thats the kind of effect you were going for you succeded. Keep on writing and I hope you didn't mind my critiqing.
3/24/2010 c1 8SpiritOfItachi
Is Hinata secretely Orochimaru, and is Naruto secretly Sasuke? Bahahaha good job. that was awesome.
8SpiritOfItachiIs Hinata secretely Orochimaru, and is Naruto secretly Sasuke? Bahahaha good job. that was awesome.
5/1/2009 c1 4Anonymous543212345
HAHA hinata's bad hah she reminds me of helga from hey Arnold making a statue of him in her closet but the urine thing O.o weird and the blood thing O.O wow i liked it though
4Anonymous543212345HAHA hinata's bad hah she reminds me of helga from hey Arnold making a statue of him in her closet but the urine thing O.o weird and the blood thing O.O wow i liked it though
4/9/2009 c1 17Eleanor Damaschke
0.o... ew. That is just... SO wrong. Hinata would never-ever-not-in-a-million-years-under-no-circumstances, ever do that. At least, I like to think so.
But the idea of an entry from Hinata's diary is a cool one. If you don't mind, I'd like to use that (maybe) in my fanfic (or outside of it).
17Eleanor Damaschke0.o... ew. That is just... SO wrong. Hinata would never-ever-not-in-a-million-years-under-no-circumstances, ever do that. At least, I like to think so.
But the idea of an entry from Hinata's diary is a cool one. If you don't mind, I'd like to use that (maybe) in my fanfic (or outside of it).
3/29/2009 c1 15Leaf Ranger
... what... the...freak?
I understand everything up to after Naruto's hair. After that... that was seriosuly *bleep*ed up.
This woul be good... if there was more, which wasn't as freaky as that.
AND I'M NOT A FLAMER! Unless the fanfic totally deserves it.
15Leaf Ranger... what... the...freak?
I understand everything up to after Naruto's hair. After that... that was seriosuly *bleep*ed up.
This woul be good... if there was more, which wasn't as freaky as that.
AND I'M NOT A FLAMER! Unless the fanfic totally deserves it.
3/12/2009 c1 17MRBee
haha fun
i'd laugh if she'd ended up making a manikin made out of Naruto's stuff lol
17MRBeehaha fun
i'd laugh if she'd ended up making a manikin made out of Naruto's stuff lol
2/4/2009 c1 5Rose Tiger
Hinata, you little theif! You're cute, but you're so bad! This is a good story! Please check out my storys, tell me what are your favorite parts, what you like about them, and why. NARUHINA FOREVER!
5Rose TigerHinata, you little theif! You're cute, but you're so bad! This is a good story! Please check out my storys, tell me what are your favorite parts, what you like about them, and why. NARUHINA FOREVER!
1/12/2009 c1 12RainWolf667
LOL...this is funny but it got a little creepy right about the urine part...Man Hinata may luv Naruto to much..I'm jk its great that sheloves him thta much...great fic it doesnt even matter that it was short!Cause it was great and every sentence set me off laughing!
12RainWolf667LOL...this is funny but it got a little creepy right about the urine part...Man Hinata may luv Naruto to much..I'm jk its great that sheloves him thta much...great fic it doesnt even matter that it was short!Cause it was great and every sentence set me off laughing!
11/10/2008 c1 Ninjamaster-255
O_O whoah i think she has graduated from fangirl to full blown Stalker some where between a lock of hair and his blood the urine is just crazy she needs help
but it is still funny
good job
O_O whoah i think she has graduated from fangirl to full blown Stalker some where between a lock of hair and his blood the urine is just crazy she needs help
but it is still funny
good job