5/4/2014 c3 1purpose-is-an-ocean
Holy crap! I thought this fic was a goner. Imagine my surprise when I saw this on the updates list! And once again, Holy crap I don't remember writing such a shoddy first review. I really must have been too lazy to type heh.

Anyway, it's so nice that Hinata is confident where it matters most. And with way the manga is going, it's so nice to read how youthful Lee is. Haha!

And seeing Neji be his old self when in the manga he sacrificed himself to protect Hinata is just...ugh...torturous! Damn you Kishimoto!

Anyway, the barrage of dance terminology almost blew me away. This chapter was way too short but I understand where you're coming from. I hope you get the twenty reviews and subsequently update soon. Your writing is impeccable and is good to have you back!

3/16/2014 c3 6winkawinkamika
I really like your writing style. There were no errors that I could detect. Couldn't help but wonder who was the mystery player aiming for a thousand dunks. Was it Sasuke, Naruto? I hope that Sakura doesn't be the main antagonist. She isn't my favorite character- in your disclaimer, I couldn't help but agree with you that Hinata should have been the main lead- but still, somehow can you make them become friends later down the line? It doesn't have to be soon, but perhaps towards the end? Your fanfic has a lot of potential. By the pace of it, I could see Ten Ten and Ino dressing Hinata up for the school's first basketball game (maybe against Suna, since you said you liked GaaHina shortly after SasuHina). And she captures the attention of more than just one pair of eyes but it isn't the blue pair she was hoping for. Don't listen to my rambling. It's your story!
I love it! Just keep writing and update soon, please! Just don't kill your followers with the wait. But don't rush it either because this story is really good and has potential to grow even more. There I go rambling again...

6/27/2010 c2 anlmoon
very interesting, please continue

9/19/2009 c2 15chocolatte-delight
Aww, no Kakashi... *pouts* well, not for Hinata, right?

Anyways, I love this chapter. You write very well; everything flows smoothly and your extensive vocabulary is just wonderful to read. I enjoy how you write the characters and I'm really wondering how you're going to continue with this... as in, what the pairing may be. I see the slightest hint of SasuHina, although I could be imagining it :)

Can't wait for your next update :)

8/18/2009 c1 chocolatte-delight
Hey, this is pretty nice.

I see a lot of potential pairings and the first chapter makes me wonder just what's going to happen. I really do hope Hinata's a basketball player or something. Anyways, I hope you update soon... lol you haven't for about a year now.