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for What is Right: Year Two

8/3 c8 MrsFH
I enjoyed both stories in this series very much, and was sad to find the second abandoned.
7/25 c8 00
how sad you did not write more
6/24 c8 Guest
Škoda že to není dokončeno. Tak skvělá zábavná povídka.
3/19 c8 140trustingHim17
Thoroughly enjoyed this and really wish there was more
2/26 c8 1moodysavage
I like how this progresses. Wish there was more
10/27/2023 c4 mumphie
Did a reread. So wish that life would let your muse ponder and then find time to continue on. I would LOVE to see where you are going with this, and how to have it all work out so that Harry, and others, can actually have a HEA life.
10/9/2023 c8 clayva85
Okay, you wrote half of the story and it is very good ut where and when are you going to finish the rest of the sec year? Carol Layland AKA
9/16/2023 c8 2Bad Wolf Jen
I would appreciate if you continue this series. after years of waiting for update I hope that you come back to the story.
8/10/2023 c8 WOLFWILDERWOOD
I love this so much! Please write more soon
7/30/2023 c8 1Sallyria
Please Update T.T
6/26/2023 c8 aGnamZer0
It was nice having a chapter nearly fully in Lucius' POV, I must say.

He truly cares about Harry, tries to understand how his mind works and makes him feel better and at home with them.

I admit I'd have loved to see a meeting between the goblins and Harry where Lucius was present. Would have been fun, seeing in direct the contrast between how both wizards are treated.

« The boy was either unaware of what he was doing or thought quills were supposed to taste sweet. No matter. It appeared to be working. »

That line killed me! XD

This story is really unique. I've read a lot of Harry Do-Over stories, but this one takes things in a direction I had yet to witness. It's so full of potential, I must ask. Is this story just in a decade long hiatus (please!) or is it actually discontinuated (noooo!)? You're obviously still active, you've updated "An Aunt's Love" last year, in this exact day in fact.

Regardless, thank you for writing and sharing this incredible story with us!
6/26/2023 c7 aGnamZer0
Harry just contradicted what was in the letter. Sirius said Harry brewed it while Harry said he bought it.

Damn Slytherins! Hahahahaha! Kudos, Severus, Narcissa, Lucius. It was splendidly played.

I wonder how Harry's gonna excuse his more 'exotic' outings. *chuckle*

Thanks for the chapter.
6/26/2023 c6 aGnamZer0
I'm pretty sure Sirius playing Canis is only the first part of their prank, but it's quite funny indeed.

I wonder what kind of reaction Narcissa had at Harry knowing how to brew Veritaserum of all things. Or maybe she doesn't realize the feat? Severus certainly will!

I honestly expected Lucius to feel jealous over Sirius. I mean, he all but said that when he was free and determined "not guilty", he'd become Harry's guardian. And Lucius clearly already thinks of Harry as his son, as his family. Knowing he lost the chance to truly become Harry's permanent guardian must have hurt him and Narcissa a lot.

Still, I imagine all that was overshadowed by the fact Harry spent his time with Sirius. Must have shocked them a lot!

Thanks for the chapter.
6/26/2023 c5 aGnamZer0
Ahah, didn't take long for Harry to find Sirius. I wonder how he knew where to find him.

Merlin! Sirius remembers! Usually, I hate it when others people than the main chaacter time travel (or dimension travel in crossovers) with them, but here, I admit I actaually quite enjoyed it. I'm glad Harry has someone to confide to (someone who experienced it) and that will actually be able to help him in a more forthright manner than Remus (well, when Sirius is finally exonerated at least).

Thank god, for once Sirius actually acted like an adult instead of an oversized child.

Honestly, Harry does feel like a child, adult mind or not. And as such, I also do want him to live with a loving family. I wonder what kind of prank Harry and Sirius planned though. XD

Thanks for the chapter.
6/26/2023 c4 aGnamZer0
Nineteen is still young, a very young adult. That he's not able to care for himself perfectly is to be expected.

Honestly, he should just enjoy being smothered in attention and love. He deserves it. It's a pity Harry think freedom is better and that he wants to pove he's an adult, not needing to be taken care of.

Pride! Had Remus not passed by, Harry would never have realized he needed follow ups potions.

Ah, so Sirius escaped after seeing his godson make the news? Looks like his second year at Hogwarts will be full of ups and down, and for once, there will be no Basilisk involved.

Thanks for the chapter.
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