for Kamisama I Shall Serve The!1/10/2013 c4 ten195
ok i like this story umm i really dont have much suggestions really, i will be thinking because this story is really good so far!
ok i like this story umm i really dont have much suggestions really, i will be thinking because this story is really good so far!
7/21/2010 c3 
3celly-of-tha-sand
Hmmm I have an idea.
What if hinata was a special ninja the last of all the special nin.
She has 2 sorces of chakara normal blue and white chakara.
Almost like she had a demon(like naruto)and yea that's an idea.
You don't have to use the idea I won't be affended
3celly-of-tha-sandHmmm I have an idea.
What if hinata was a special ninja the last of all the special nin.
She has 2 sorces of chakara normal blue and white chakara.
Almost like she had a demon(like naruto)and yea that's an idea.
You don't have to use the idea I won't be affended
7/20/2010 c4 celly-of-tha-sand
ohhhhhhh make them a couple after everything that is going on and make kami fix and THEN understand what is going on.
naruto should love hinata to no end and fight for the right to marry hinata.
srry im giddy right now WRITE ON!
UP DAAAAAAAATE!
ohhhhhhh make them a couple after everything that is going on and make kami fix and THEN understand what is going on.
naruto should love hinata to no end and fight for the right to marry hinata.
srry im giddy right now WRITE ON!
UP DAAAAAAAATE!
7/20/2010 c2 celly-of-tha-sand
Im impressed at this and one little prob you are great at story writting but it seems as if you type to fast and the letters are fliped around or reversed.
Eithet way keep up your great writing
Im impressed at this and one little prob you are great at story writting but it seems as if you type to fast and the letters are fliped around or reversed.
Eithet way keep up your great writing
8/3/2009 c3 15SAMtheAvenger
Finally an update... I was begging to wonder whether or not you were dead or something O.O lol
I think maybe you should space out what happens in your chapters a bit more... this one seemed a bit packed, and there was loads of info to take in for that one chapter. I look forward to your next one though, and good luck with your digging! :)
15SAMtheAvengerFinally an update... I was begging to wonder whether or not you were dead or something O.O lol
I think maybe you should space out what happens in your chapters a bit more... this one seemed a bit packed, and there was loads of info to take in for that one chapter. I look forward to your next one though, and good luck with your digging! :)
8/3/2009 c3 narutos vixen
thanks its ok ... i kinda forgot what i said in the first place oh and btw im a girl O_o what did i say?oh you know how sasuke needs to revive his clan will he try to use hinata as a way of having strong offspring or something like that?
thanks its ok ... i kinda forgot what i said in the first place oh and btw im a girl O_o what did i say?oh you know how sasuke needs to revive his clan will he try to use hinata as a way of having strong offspring or something like that?
7/13/2009 c2 narutos vixen
wow why havent you updated you on a hiatus or writers block oh and do you plan on updating
wow why havent you updated you on a hiatus or writers block oh and do you plan on updating
6/30/2009 c2 SAMtheAvenger
Excellent so far :D
I would definitely want to read the next chapter soon.
Excellent so far :D
I would definitely want to read the next chapter soon.
11/9/2008 c1 Rose Of Demise
please continue this fic is great i really cant wait to see what will happen next!
please continue this fic is great i really cant wait to see what will happen next!
11/9/2008 c1 4Kyuubi123
Very intriguing chapter. This chapter leaves me wondering what will happen next. What is that strange chakra? What did kami mean at the end? All in all i think that this chapter was okay. This story may turn out to be very interesting. I will wait until i read more to pass a final conclusion but so far i like it.
4Kyuubi123Very intriguing chapter. This chapter leaves me wondering what will happen next. What is that strange chakra? What did kami mean at the end? All in all i think that this chapter was okay. This story may turn out to be very interesting. I will wait until i read more to pass a final conclusion but so far i like it.