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7/10/2010 c1 1shai-duck
Squee~

I LOVE LOVE LOVE FangXMax. There should be more fluff in this world for them. I mean, JP totally murdered this pair at the end of Fang. GAH.

And I have to say that most of the Fax fanfiction are atrocious. It's so difficult to find a good one. So I'm pretty psyched that this one met my (admittedly high) expectations :D

Two thumbs way, WAY up! :D
4/29/2010 c1 fantasyfiction313
So great! LOVE all the details!
3/7/2010 c1 10queenofinsane
This was very good and well written. Though I found it a little weird that you kept changing the wwriting style. At first it was like Max was talking to Fang, then she referred to him in third person. It was just a little werid. Other wise this was pretty good, unfortunately most of the Maximum Ride fanfictions I find aren't very good. It was refreshing to find one that wasn't terrible. Good job.
11/19/2009 c1 22Kina Kalamari
That was AWESOME! Excellent job! Well written, incredibly Faxy, superbly...everything else...Just overall a wonderful oneshot.

Oh, and a tip: You may want to change your disclaimer, because now that MAX is out, you're kind of claiming that you own Maximum Ride. Obviously, not a good thing...
10/31/2009 c1 4Shadowed Nightwings
wow. amazing story
7/26/2009 c1 29FalselyTrue
Ella: So you own Maximum Ride now? Hm. I liked this version of them getting together better than the one in Max...

Luna: I liked it, and I'm not normally a fan of FAX...or MANG...I like MANG better...

Rose: It's short and sweet. Very cute.
6/23/2009 c1 9WaterWings617
beautiful.

absolutely beautiful.

you are an excellent writer.
6/20/2009 c1 Fantastical Fwooper
Aah! that was AMAZING! you are SO right about the whole four books of nothing thing. and about fang being a closet romantic. you write his pov reeaally well, by the way. those were the best parts, in my opinion. especially the valium flashback. i loved it! ;D
1/23/2009 c1 5Dancing in a Midnight Storm
very well written. very clever. love it. :)

warrior angel
12/30/2008 c1 32Xx-Erin-xX-AthrunxCagallifan
I haven't actually read the second or fourth books. I'm sort of out of wack, but I am a Max and Fang fan! My favourite page in any book is where he is thinking about her after she runs away from him after he kisses her in the third book. I am waiting excitedly to read the fourth book, praying for them to be together and they aren't going to be? (hides head and sobs pathetically) that is terrible

anyways this story is brilliant. I love it soo much! You did a great job! well done
12/25/2008 c1 skylar
ths was really good and is it from the final warning?
12/13/2008 c1 7waterjazz
this was beautiful! But wheres the rest of the flock? I'm thinking, "Why are they kissing with the Flock rght there?"
12/9/2008 c1 Misery Mimed
Aww... so... romantic... and kind of funny. :P

I just read the second book of Maximum Ride... There should be more writers like you out there!

Since I can't think of anything else to put in this review which makes sense, I bid my farewell. :D

Keep writing. :D

~Misery.
12/6/2008 c1 Natt774
This is demn funny. But if you didn't mean it that way... Nice chap.
11/27/2008 c1 3salion220
Wow, that was really pretty. Your detail is so amazing!
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