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11/10/2008 c1 3Angela-Amazingly Special Girl
*sob*! that was absolutely BEAUTIFUL!
11/10/2008 c1 14xmoonlightxwingsx
omg. holy crap on a cracker. i LOVED this. you totally mesh JP's fax and your own fax perfectly. ahmazing. keep writing!
11/10/2008 c1 50Lost in Believing
Perfect! See, that's how it's suppose to be in the books. Hopefully there will be some more in the fifth. Great job.
11/10/2008 c1 mandyfur123
that was really really good Are u gonna write more?
11/10/2008 c1 lolpartygal2009
wow! that was really good. i was like drowning in the description (thats good) are u going to write more?
11/10/2008 c1 Jen
Wow. This was amazing. Punctuation, grammar and spelling were all correct, and it flowed so beautifully, far surpassing any other stories I have read. You write beautifully, with feeling. I could go on but I won't. Just...wow.

Jenny
11/10/2008 c1 mimi
i loved the actual lines said but i think you put a little too much detail in the chapter.

just one readers opinion. loved it though

please write another chapter! o and maybe get some awkwardness from angel-maybe

wonderful chapter!

mimi
11/10/2008 c1 Ninja.Melting.Hydrogen
amazing

i loved the way you put this all together

:)
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