for One of the Guys8/24/2011 c1 
1ihearttwilightmorethanu
I really like this story so far! I've always had a thing for unrequited-love stories...
Keep it coming please!
1ihearttwilightmorethanuI really like this story so far! I've always had a thing for unrequited-love stories...
Keep it coming please!
8/16/2010 c12 maru1824
Excellent chapter!I am charmed with edward and bella are so pretty!Update soon!His lemons are excellent! very hot!
Excellent chapter!I am charmed with edward and bella are so pretty!Update soon!His lemons are excellent! very hot!
5/12/2010 c12 1f-f-o
PLEASE continue this story soon, your an amazing writer and i seriously think that these characters are awesome. I'd love to see where they go on from here
1f-f-oPLEASE continue this story soon, your an amazing writer and i seriously think that these characters are awesome. I'd love to see where they go on from here
4/20/2010 c10 feedmemore
Eh, I don't know if I'd buy that.. I mean, if he thought she was joking when she'd walked out, after 10 minutes or so, I'd start getting worried. It sounds like he stayed 2 or 3 hrs longer at the bar after Bella left... So, okay. Let's say I believe Edward. Then, I guess I would have to punch out Rose at least once. I totes think that Edward should have stayed home with Bella instead of going out with the guys anyway. But he was so sweet with all the prep. with the date and all, I'd let it go.
Eh, I don't know if I'd buy that.. I mean, if he thought she was joking when she'd walked out, after 10 minutes or so, I'd start getting worried. It sounds like he stayed 2 or 3 hrs longer at the bar after Bella left... So, okay. Let's say I believe Edward. Then, I guess I would have to punch out Rose at least once. I totes think that Edward should have stayed home with Bella instead of going out with the guys anyway. But he was so sweet with all the prep. with the date and all, I'd let it go.
4/20/2010 c9 feedmemore
Okay. I don't get one thing. When Bella showed up, it seemed as if she was totally ignored by everyone, including Edward. If the love of my life showed up at the bar and I was hanging with someone that he didn't like-, and hello, she had alcohol poisoning a week ago!. Why was Edward not looking after love of his life? I mean, while she was acting all pissed off and talking to Jake and downing shots, 6 people who are supposed to be her friends were all paired off and laughing and having good time and ignoring her. I would be very pissed off too indeed! I mean, I don't care if Tanya was a lesbian and had no chance of romance with Edward. What Edward did made no sense to me.
Okay. I don't get one thing. When Bella showed up, it seemed as if she was totally ignored by everyone, including Edward. If the love of my life showed up at the bar and I was hanging with someone that he didn't like-, and hello, she had alcohol poisoning a week ago!. Why was Edward not looking after love of his life? I mean, while she was acting all pissed off and talking to Jake and downing shots, 6 people who are supposed to be her friends were all paired off and laughing and having good time and ignoring her. I would be very pissed off too indeed! I mean, I don't care if Tanya was a lesbian and had no chance of romance with Edward. What Edward did made no sense to me.
4/20/2010 c8 feedmemore
Aahh.. That was so sweet. Maybe your Bella won't be the usual idiot and actually communicate with Edward. I so cannot stand all the stories with all the misunderstandings between those two.
Dr. Phil? says communication is the key.
Aahh.. That was so sweet. Maybe your Bella won't be the usual idiot and actually communicate with Edward. I so cannot stand all the stories with all the misunderstandings between those two.
Dr. Phil? says communication is the key.
4/20/2010 c7 feedmemore
I love it!. Your stories make me laugh! And trust me, I don't really get to laugh as much as I used to these days and anything that makes me smile or laugh is golden in my book.
Thank you.
I love it!. Your stories make me laugh! And trust me, I don't really get to laugh as much as I used to these days and anything that makes me smile or laugh is golden in my book.
Thank you.
4/13/2010 c3 Saniaast27
THE LEMONS ARE HOT AND SORRY TO SEE THIS STORY IN HIATIUS I LOVE IT PLZ CONTINUE
THE LEMONS ARE HOT AND SORRY TO SEE THIS STORY IN HIATIUS I LOVE IT PLZ CONTINUE
9/21/2009 c12 1youngandmature
I think it's kind of stupid that even after he admits he loves her he's thinking her hot other girls 'tits' are. And that he says their kiss in truth or dare was the single most hottest thing. Shouldn't Bella be?
1youngandmatureI think it's kind of stupid that even after he admits he loves her he's thinking her hot other girls 'tits' are. And that he says their kiss in truth or dare was the single most hottest thing. Shouldn't Bella be?
9/21/2009 c9 youngandmature
Your a great writer. The lemons are fine. And loving the storyline. Does Bella actually love Edward because her inner monologue checklist was fairly basic and wouldn't the answer have come to her instantly the first time he said it at the club. Like, is she just making excuses or whatever and trying to convince herself that she loves him? And if not then how come she was so blind to see it, she doesn't have Edward's excuse of 'I don't want to lose her as a friend'. So what's her excuse/deal?
Your a great writer. The lemons are fine. And loving the storyline. Does Bella actually love Edward because her inner monologue checklist was fairly basic and wouldn't the answer have come to her instantly the first time he said it at the club. Like, is she just making excuses or whatever and trying to convince herself that she loves him? And if not then how come she was so blind to see it, she doesn't have Edward's excuse of 'I don't want to lose her as a friend'. So what's her excuse/deal?