for One of the Guys11/11/2008 c1 australianvamp
yes you should finish it... edward should have just jumped into that shower... you would nto be hearign me complain if edward did that to me
yes you should finish it... edward should have just jumped into that shower... you would nto be hearign me complain if edward did that to me
11/11/2008 c1 
10Spoollee
You so have to continue this story. I started laughing out loud at work and got crazy looks from it. PLEASE update soon!
10SpoolleeYou so have to continue this story. I started laughing out loud at work and got crazy looks from it. PLEASE update soon!
11/11/2008 c1 StorieOfAGirl
Oh my gosh I love your story! I think it's a really awesome idea! You must continue! :)
Oh my gosh I love your story! I think it's a really awesome idea! You must continue! :)
11/11/2008 c1 2Koujislover
you should defiantly finish this. its hilarious omg i want to read more lol
2Koujisloveryou should defiantly finish this. its hilarious omg i want to read more lol
11/11/2008 c1 3Overtaken By Darkness
I really like what you have written so far. It seems like it will be an interesting story. Please keep going. Update soon?
3Overtaken By DarknessI really like what you have written so far. It seems like it will be an interesting story. Please keep going. Update soon?
11/11/2008 c1 2chelseapeeler
I really like what you've written so far! Sounds like it's going to be a very interesting story so please continue and update soon!
2chelseapeelerI really like what you've written so far! Sounds like it's going to be a very interesting story so please continue and update soon!
11/11/2008 c1 Lorinstarr
this is awesome! write more for me! plz!
update soon to save my sanity!
lots of love, lorin
this is awesome! write more for me! plz!
update soon to save my sanity!
lots of love, lorin