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2moosejuice5
1. You said their was 50 agents, I doubt very much that one grenade would get even 10 of them.
2. It's shown twice that Claire's regeneration ability is able to recover from a point blank nuclear explosion, a grenade really wouldn't be able to kill somebody with it.
3. Great fic, up until this point I loved it.
2moosejuice51. You said their was 50 agents, I doubt very much that one grenade would get even 10 of them.
2. It's shown twice that Claire's regeneration ability is able to recover from a point blank nuclear explosion, a grenade really wouldn't be able to kill somebody with it.
3. Great fic, up until this point I loved it.
6/9/2014 c14 Kitana Mayo
why did you kill him off I love your story very well written but you didn't have to kill him
why did you kill him off I love your story very well written but you didn't have to kill him
9/26/2013 c14 Guest
Fantastic story. I was sad that Gabriel had to die, but it was necessary. I cried. It was that spectacular of a fic. Keep writing fantastic fics!
Fantastic story. I was sad that Gabriel had to die, but it was necessary. I cried. It was that spectacular of a fic. Keep writing fantastic fics!
9/13/2013 c14 hiddlesquinto
omg this fic made me cry so much... I love it so much it is the best one I have read in a while.
omg this fic made me cry so much... I love it so much it is the best one I have read in a while.
3/10/2013 c14 Guest
The first time I read this I sobbed, and this time I cried even harder. I JUST CAN'T OKAY. I CAN'T.
The first time I read this I sobbed, and this time I cried even harder. I JUST CAN'T OKAY. I CAN'T.
6/30/2010 c14 2kissngoodbye
that was so sad T.T really loved your plot throughout, it was stunning XD love syclair pair!
but omggg how could he die T.T thought he had her power = wont die T.T could you do an alternate ending or some sort? hehehes XD
2kissngoodbyethat was so sad T.T really loved your plot throughout, it was stunning XD love syclair pair!
but omggg how could he die T.T thought he had her power = wont die T.T could you do an alternate ending or some sort? hehehes XD
11/21/2009 c14 1demonicmoon815
Absolutely the best Sylar and Claire fanfic I've ever read.
Please don't stop =]
1demonicmoon815Absolutely the best Sylar and Claire fanfic I've ever read.
Please don't stop =]
6/1/2009 c14 3synjax
B-b...b-but...Sylar can't die! Wait...correct me if I'm wrong, but Sylar took Claire ability in this fic...right? or didn't he?
~I'M CRYING OVER HERE! YOU ARE TOTALLY-TRULY-AWESOMELY-ROCKIN'-COOL!
~KEEP UP THE ROCKIN' JOB! ^^
3synjaxB-b...b-but...Sylar can't die! Wait...correct me if I'm wrong, but Sylar took Claire ability in this fic...right? or didn't he?
~I'M CRYING OVER HERE! YOU ARE TOTALLY-TRULY-AWESOMELY-ROCKIN'-COOL!
~KEEP UP THE ROCKIN' JOB! ^^
5/31/2009 c1 synjax
Aw man...Lyle died...=( and Claire's been crying and crying...and, oh my gosh, $250,0? wow...they ARE Petrellis anyway...
~KEEP UP THE T.T.A.R.C. JOB! ^^
Aw man...Lyle died...=( and Claire's been crying and crying...and, oh my gosh, $250,0? wow...they ARE Petrellis anyway...
~KEEP UP THE T.T.A.R.C. JOB! ^^
5/2/2009 c14 7lordoftheringsfanficreader
Aw... I want to cry. But that was easily the best ending I've read for ANY Heroes fanfic, not just Sylar/Claire ones. Great writing all the way through... keep up the wonderful work! ^_^
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7lordoftheringsfanficreaderAw... I want to cry. But that was easily the best ending I've read for ANY Heroes fanfic, not just Sylar/Claire ones. Great writing all the way through... keep up the wonderful work! ^_^
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