6/22/2009 c1 Globby
that was amazing, the tention was captivating; i would have put something more like this at the end, "the light slowly hazed out all of my room, the darkness was consuming us. panic filled my eyes, as the darkness slowly filled my sight; no way of return". That is just my opinion, you dont have to listen to any of that, it was just a suggestion. i still loved the kingdom hearts story line, great work anyways, keep it up.