for Blood Stained Lips4/22/2009 c1 memoryxlock
i was so worried that you weren't going to post anymore chapters. it was forever ago that i started reading this and then i had to sit and wait for another chapter T_T Anyways i think your a great writer and you do, do a great job adding the twilight twist to it! Keep it up and post more!And when will Mizuki learn of everything and um will kaiten(sp?) and her get closer?
i was so worried that you weren't going to post anymore chapters. it was forever ago that i started reading this and then i had to sit and wait for another chapter T_T Anyways i think your a great writer and you do, do a great job adding the twilight twist to it! Keep it up and post more!And when will Mizuki learn of everything and um will kaiten(sp?) and her get closer?
1/19/2009 c6 Lapislazu
Why is Itachi so cruel in this chapter? Even if the nightingale nickname is kind of sweet:).
So how are you going to continue? Please update soon!
Why is Itachi so cruel in this chapter? Even if the nightingale nickname is kind of sweet:).
So how are you going to continue? Please update soon!
1/2/2009 c1 Lapislazu
Oh my! I so love your combination of Twilight and Naruto! I hope you can satisfy all of your dear readers^^. You created a really high expectation into your story, and so far you are still holding it! Can't wait till the next update!
Oh my! I so love your combination of Twilight and Naruto! I hope you can satisfy all of your dear readers^^. You created a really high expectation into your story, and so far you are still holding it! Can't wait till the next update!
12/26/2008 c2 
1KS-Bladez
u made a huge mistake. the name of ur character. every time it saus mizuki i think of muzuki in Naruto universe...and thats very disturbing...still i guss i just of to get used to it. oh and nice writing style
1KS-Bladezu made a huge mistake. the name of ur character. every time it saus mizuki i think of muzuki in Naruto universe...and thats very disturbing...still i guss i just of to get used to it. oh and nice writing style
11/15/2008 c2 3Luno Konick
I'm impressed, normally I don't even get finished chapter one of an original environment Fanfic, but your writing style and lack of Glaring mistakes make it a pleasure to read. Though this story has an interesting developing plot, i would like to see what you could do with a Naruto universe Fanfic.
3Luno KonickI'm impressed, normally I don't even get finished chapter one of an original environment Fanfic, but your writing style and lack of Glaring mistakes make it a pleasure to read. Though this story has an interesting developing plot, i would like to see what you could do with a Naruto universe Fanfic.