for Twists of Fate6/24/2011 c30 
3Ilaaris
I’m glad to see this updated. I'm really enjoying this story and I hope you add more soon!
3IlaarisI’m glad to see this updated. I'm really enjoying this story and I hope you add more soon!
6/18/2011 c30 46moonjat54
Oh my goodness...Josh stepped into it big time now. Will Hank let him live long enough to talk to Coraline? And will Coraline be angry or rather touched that Josh would follow her? So many questions and I am so glad you brought this back. I hope you finish it.
46moonjat54Oh my goodness...Josh stepped into it big time now. Will Hank let him live long enough to talk to Coraline? And will Coraline be angry or rather touched that Josh would follow her? So many questions and I am so glad you brought this back. I hope you finish it.
6/15/2010 c29 sj61
Josh is really a wonderful man, almost too good to be true, the guy is a saint; he’s so patient and treats Coraline much better than she deserves! It seems like she starts to realise what a total jerk she’s been, hopefully that will turn into something good and she’ll turn her life around! It was interesting to know about Coraline’s sad background, even if her treatment of Josh and others isn’t excusable, you can’t help but feel sorry for her! Thank you for the nice long chappie, I appreciate it! :)
Josh is really a wonderful man, almost too good to be true, the guy is a saint; he’s so patient and treats Coraline much better than she deserves! It seems like she starts to realise what a total jerk she’s been, hopefully that will turn into something good and she’ll turn her life around! It was interesting to know about Coraline’s sad background, even if her treatment of Josh and others isn’t excusable, you can’t help but feel sorry for her! Thank you for the nice long chappie, I appreciate it! :)
6/14/2010 c29 moonjat54
I do worry about Josh. I can't bring my self to trust Coraline, she has played too many games and he is going to get hurt. And I do not want her to hurt Beth either. It is getting very complicated in all these twists.
I do worry about Josh. I can't bring my self to trust Coraline, she has played too many games and he is going to get hurt. And I do not want her to hurt Beth either. It is getting very complicated in all these twists.
6/14/2010 c29 11Vampire Reader
I couldn't resist when I saw another chapter of this. Now, on to my shower, etc. The rest of my mail can wait. Poor, twisted Morgan. She is so unhappy. Like Josh, I wanted to understand her too. That girl cast a spell on everyone, even viewers who never got enough of her.
11Vampire ReaderI couldn't resist when I saw another chapter of this. Now, on to my shower, etc. The rest of my mail can wait. Poor, twisted Morgan. She is so unhappy. Like Josh, I wanted to understand her too. That girl cast a spell on everyone, even viewers who never got enough of her.
5/29/2010 c28 sj61
We finally get to know Coralline’s inner feeling, she isn’t just an annoying, selfish and dangerous person, there’s actually a very hurt and damaged person behind the facade. I do feel sorry for her, even if I don’t like her completely. Hopefully she’ll change her ways. It’ll be interesting so see if Josh can do anything about it and maybe help her to mend her broken heart! Very Good!
We finally get to know Coralline’s inner feeling, she isn’t just an annoying, selfish and dangerous person, there’s actually a very hurt and damaged person behind the facade. I do feel sorry for her, even if I don’t like her completely. Hopefully she’ll change her ways. It’ll be interesting so see if Josh can do anything about it and maybe help her to mend her broken heart! Very Good!
5/28/2010 c28 46moonjat54
Oh my, I hope Josh knows what he is doing. He is in Coraline's place and if she thinks he has been reading her diary she may react violently. And I'm sure that even though she is human she may still be able to hurt him. Loved the diary and how you explained Coraline being able to escape the fire in the cabin.
46moonjat54Oh my, I hope Josh knows what he is doing. He is in Coraline's place and if she thinks he has been reading her diary she may react violently. And I'm sure that even though she is human she may still be able to hurt him. Loved the diary and how you explained Coraline being able to escape the fire in the cabin.
5/28/2010 c28 11Vampire Reader
You expose the dichotomy that is Coraline so well, as well as I have ever seen it done. We now know that Henry has been around Coraline for some time. Did she turn him? I don't think you said. The one other thing that still bothers me about that episode is that if Beth's research was right, C was branded, not tattooed. Maybe Beth was wrong. I'm glad C would have let Beth grow up. I think we all supposed she wanted to keep Beth a child forever. What a sad, strange piece of work is poor Coraline. Josh can't leave her and make her feel abandoned again. What next?
VR/Penina
11Vampire ReaderYou expose the dichotomy that is Coraline so well, as well as I have ever seen it done. We now know that Henry has been around Coraline for some time. Did she turn him? I don't think you said. The one other thing that still bothers me about that episode is that if Beth's research was right, C was branded, not tattooed. Maybe Beth was wrong. I'm glad C would have let Beth grow up. I think we all supposed she wanted to keep Beth a child forever. What a sad, strange piece of work is poor Coraline. Josh can't leave her and make her feel abandoned again. What next?
VR/Penina
5/26/2010 c27 sj61
Morgan/ Coraline are way too complicated for Josh, she seems to use anyone and everyone and there’s always someone that get hurt, in this case Josh! I feel sorry for him, he’s way to naïve, I think! I do hope he will find someone that shows him the love he deserves, because right now Morgan doesn’t! It’ll be interesting to see where you’re taking the story. Good chapter!
Morgan/ Coraline are way too complicated for Josh, she seems to use anyone and everyone and there’s always someone that get hurt, in this case Josh! I feel sorry for him, he’s way to naïve, I think! I do hope he will find someone that shows him the love he deserves, because right now Morgan doesn’t! It’ll be interesting to see where you’re taking the story. Good chapter!
5/24/2010 c27 Vampire Reader
You find all the hidden aspects of the characters' motivations, things we were not shown. This was possibly the most unfinished episode of all, with so many loose ends. You are tying them up. I give you much credit and respect your skill for how you are handling this. I'm on edge (of my computer chair) waiting to see your version of what happened next.
VR
You find all the hidden aspects of the characters' motivations, things we were not shown. This was possibly the most unfinished episode of all, with so many loose ends. You are tying them up. I give you much credit and respect your skill for how you are handling this. I'm on edge (of my computer chair) waiting to see your version of what happened next.
VR
5/24/2010 c27 46moonjat54
Well Josh got hit with a truth he didn't want to hear. Coraline is not giving up on getting Mick back and she doesn't seem to care for Josh. He is being used. Intriguing finish to the chapter, just what did he read? I am glad that he and Mick seemed to have come to some type of understanding even if they are still hiding some truths from each other.
46moonjat54Well Josh got hit with a truth he didn't want to hear. Coraline is not giving up on getting Mick back and she doesn't seem to care for Josh. He is being used. Intriguing finish to the chapter, just what did he read? I am glad that he and Mick seemed to have come to some type of understanding even if they are still hiding some truths from each other.
5/5/2010 c26 sj61
I was so thrilled when I discovered a new chapter, this story is definitely one of my”Moonlight” favs! A very intriguing story, Josh is a sweetheart, but Morgan is just too sneaky, and doesn’t seem very honest with anything, so I really don’t know if I like the girl or not! Hopefully, we don’t have to wait to long to find out what she’s up to next! Very well done! :)
I was so thrilled when I discovered a new chapter, this story is definitely one of my”Moonlight” favs! A very intriguing story, Josh is a sweetheart, but Morgan is just too sneaky, and doesn’t seem very honest with anything, so I really don’t know if I like the girl or not! Hopefully, we don’t have to wait to long to find out what she’s up to next! Very well done! :)
5/4/2010 c26 11Vampire Reader
I'm so excited at the way you are doing this. I have so many questions about this episode, and you're going to answer them for me. It seems weird to have Josh in this story instead of Josef, and knowing more than Mick does. I can hardly wait to see what you'll (they'll) do next. Thank for the update. VR/Penina
11Vampire ReaderI'm so excited at the way you are doing this. I have so many questions about this episode, and you're going to answer them for me. It seems weird to have Josh in this story instead of Josef, and knowing more than Mick does. I can hardly wait to see what you'll (they'll) do next. Thank for the update. VR/Penina
5/4/2010 c26 46moonjat54
Ah, the plot thickens... sooner or later Josh is giong to have to admit he knows about vampires to Mick. Won't he? Morgan/Coraline is playing a very complicated game and I'm interested in where she is going with this. If she still wants Mick, Josh is going to be a complication. I look forward to reading more.
46moonjat54Ah, the plot thickens... sooner or later Josh is giong to have to admit he knows about vampires to Mick. Won't he? Morgan/Coraline is playing a very complicated game and I'm interested in where she is going with this. If she still wants Mick, Josh is going to be a complication. I look forward to reading more.