
12/20/2010 c5
2crazyfreak1995
the correct speelings are:
ulquiorra, grimmjow, and yammy!
this is a great story! update soon!

the correct speelings are:
ulquiorra, grimmjow, and yammy!
this is a great story! update soon!
12/5/2010 c5
11Miku Alli
Awesome idea! But please spell check is a wonderful thing. Also, if you have questions about how to spell some names from Bleach you can always google it. (:

Awesome idea! But please spell check is a wonderful thing. Also, if you have questions about how to spell some names from Bleach you can always google it. (:
11/24/2010 c5
2DarkenedMoonlight
This story is good... but im not trying to be messed up or anything but longer chapters and spell check would help immensely... but other than that its way good ... oh and try more detail... i had the same problem too but im sure you can over come it ...
update soon please.

This story is good... but im not trying to be messed up or anything but longer chapters and spell check would help immensely... but other than that its way good ... oh and try more detail... i had the same problem too but im sure you can over come it ...
update soon please.
7/21/2010 c5
3Kaoru Ichimaru
Their names are Ulquiorra, Grimmjow, and Yammy. Not sure how to spell their last names though. Please update this soon!

Their names are Ulquiorra, Grimmjow, and Yammy. Not sure how to spell their last names though. Please update this soon!
12/11/2009 c5 Kavyle
Oops-I just noticed something.
Yeah, I'm reviewing after I just sent you a PM. Sorry, you must think I'm incredibly annoying at this point.
Okay, so Ulquiorra's last name is spelled "Schiffer" or "Cifer". It's interchangeable because the romanization was changed at one point or another. Grimmjow's last name is spelled "Jaegerjaquez". Of course, there's a little controversy on that name as well, but I'd stick with "Jaegerjaquez" as that's how it's more commonly spelled.
Also:
Update soon, please. =)
Oops-I just noticed something.
Yeah, I'm reviewing after I just sent you a PM. Sorry, you must think I'm incredibly annoying at this point.
Okay, so Ulquiorra's last name is spelled "Schiffer" or "Cifer". It's interchangeable because the romanization was changed at one point or another. Grimmjow's last name is spelled "Jaegerjaquez". Of course, there's a little controversy on that name as well, but I'd stick with "Jaegerjaquez" as that's how it's more commonly spelled.
Also:
Update soon, please. =)
12/7/2009 c5
5Alluringmermaid
I think you forgot to mention Fuu-Dog in this. You can't do a ADJL without FuuDog cracked jokes and causing mischief behind Gramps back.

I think you forgot to mention Fuu-Dog in this. You can't do a ADJL without FuuDog cracked jokes and causing mischief behind Gramps back.
11/1/2009 c5
6MonkeysGoMoo
Wow i cant wait to see jake n dems expression wen ichigo and grimmjow start fighting im laughing just thinking about it!

Wow i cant wait to see jake n dems expression wen ichigo and grimmjow start fighting im laughing just thinking about it!
10/14/2009 c3 Luiz4200
(1) I honestly almost typed uncle here
Oh, another JCA fan. And good work with A Ghost Story. Until now, I never thought the events of that episode could have taken place before the Huntsclan's demise but now I think about it, it's quite possible.
(1) I honestly almost typed uncle here
Oh, another JCA fan. And good work with A Ghost Story. Until now, I never thought the events of that episode could have taken place before the Huntsclan's demise but now I think about it, it's quite possible.