for Dragon meets Death god11/22/2008 c2 
1J'aime Manga
I've never read American Dragon before, but I like your story so far. You seem to a lot of trouble with spelling so you might want to either use a spell checking program or you might want to get someone to Beta read your story. By the way Ichigo's last name is Kurosaki and Renji's is Abarai. However, I really like your story and am anticipating your next installment.
1J'aime MangaI've never read American Dragon before, but I like your story so far. You seem to a lot of trouble with spelling so you might want to either use a spell checking program or you might want to get someone to Beta read your story. By the way Ichigo's last name is Kurosaki and Renji's is Abarai. However, I really like your story and am anticipating your next installment.
11/17/2008 c1 13Yukiko Shiroryuu
that's so cool i love it already! who will the lucky soul reapers be? Ichigo? Rukia? Toshiro? Renji? OH! the excitement! hurry and update soon!
13Yukiko Shiroryuuthat's so cool i love it already! who will the lucky soul reapers be? Ichigo? Rukia? Toshiro? Renji? OH! the excitement! hurry and update soon!
11/16/2008 c1 Kizoku Seishin
... is this a troll story meant to draw in flamers?
If that's not the case, this is not a good story. Too many spelling and grammar errors.
More important, it doesn't make the reader think, "I should keep reading." Instead, the chapter is ordinary. Perhaps if the chapter included the shinigami ...
... is this a troll story meant to draw in flamers?
If that's not the case, this is not a good story. Too many spelling and grammar errors.
More important, it doesn't make the reader think, "I should keep reading." Instead, the chapter is ordinary. Perhaps if the chapter included the shinigami ...