
1/6/2011 c1 Kitsune
fff. When I searched this pairing for a laugh, I did not expect to find this! xD How sickening.. Almost makes me feel sorry for Wormtail... Almost. ;D Very well written, though! I liked it. This worries me. A lot. D:
fff. When I searched this pairing for a laugh, I did not expect to find this! xD How sickening.. Almost makes me feel sorry for Wormtail... Almost. ;D Very well written, though! I liked it. This worries me. A lot. D:
8/7/2009 c1
3Yesha Thorn
Wow. That was sick, but well written. Ugh. Still a very sick pairing. Oh, poor Harry. He'll now not only have a scar on his forehead, he's now mentally scarred as well...
-Flower

Wow. That was sick, but well written. Ugh. Still a very sick pairing. Oh, poor Harry. He'll now not only have a scar on his forehead, he's now mentally scarred as well...
-Flower
8/5/2009 c1
300Inkfire
Ow. This was very sick, but well done in a sick way^^
I kinda liked it... But I freaked really bad^^
You're forgiven because you haven't described anything more than necessary... xD
(awful dilemma about the favorites)
Come on.

Ow. This was very sick, but well done in a sick way^^
I kinda liked it... But I freaked really bad^^
You're forgiven because you haven't described anything more than necessary... xD
(awful dilemma about the favorites)
Come on.
7/12/2009 c1
5Bloodshot Chocolate
Oh my God! O_O This was...well written but...wow. It made me shiver. Poor Wormtail! If I were Harry, I would have been even more mentally scarred. x_x

Oh my God! O_O This was...well written but...wow. It made me shiver. Poor Wormtail! If I were Harry, I would have been even more mentally scarred. x_x
5/2/2009 c1
11ClosetedDork
Gross gross gross!
but it was written really well
And at the part with Harry Potter, I laughed, it was funny

Gross gross gross!
but it was written really well
And at the part with Harry Potter, I laughed, it was funny
1/2/2009 c1 The Eye Behind The Mask
it is really well written... but i must say that after i thot i was going to do a harry...*shudders*.but it was really good.(^_^)
it is really well written... but i must say that after i thot i was going to do a harry...*shudders*.but it was really good.(^_^)
12/1/2008 c1
13scorsby
this is actually really well written. Its a good story though it did make me feel rather sick. Just the slicing and dicing and... *shudders*.
I know which challenge you wrote it for and I think if it doesnt win then there is something more wrong with the challenge than there is with the nature of this story.
My favourite line was
"As much as I may enjoy the occasional dead body..." That made me laugh, though im not certain it was meant to...
Anyway, you should really have more reviews than this- I bet you have oads of hits, only people are too scared of what people will think if they have it in their records. Which they shoudlnt. We're on here to read good fiction and this, disturbing or not, is very good fiction indeed.
Anyway, how's that for a review?
really good, you have a great style.
Cheers,
Zellahxx

this is actually really well written. Its a good story though it did make me feel rather sick. Just the slicing and dicing and... *shudders*.
I know which challenge you wrote it for and I think if it doesnt win then there is something more wrong with the challenge than there is with the nature of this story.
My favourite line was
"As much as I may enjoy the occasional dead body..." That made me laugh, though im not certain it was meant to...
Anyway, you should really have more reviews than this- I bet you have oads of hits, only people are too scared of what people will think if they have it in their records. Which they shoudlnt. We're on here to read good fiction and this, disturbing or not, is very good fiction indeed.
Anyway, how's that for a review?
really good, you have a great style.
Cheers,
Zellahxx
11/18/2008 c1
34Shuna
Hi there Kokou. I liked the fic. My mind found it very satisfying, and that's scaring me. NOT! Poor Harry though. Seeing that would certainly drive me insane, or maybe more insane. You know what, I have always thought that the conection was set unfair. Harry should have been insane after two years of seeing that every night. No one is that pure that they wouldn't be damaged, or at least have nightmares about what he had to see.
Good work

Hi there Kokou. I liked the fic. My mind found it very satisfying, and that's scaring me. NOT! Poor Harry though. Seeing that would certainly drive me insane, or maybe more insane. You know what, I have always thought that the conection was set unfair. Harry should have been insane after two years of seeing that every night. No one is that pure that they wouldn't be damaged, or at least have nightmares about what he had to see.
Good work