for Soul of a Sword4/10/2010 c7 AvidReader417
i so didnt see that coming.
please update as soon as you can. i cant wait to see what happens next.
i so didnt see that coming.
please update as soon as you can. i cant wait to see what happens next.
1/18/2009 c6 
2ecaniaga
Oho! Skyler, aye? Bit of competition maybe? Or perhaps just a brotherly influence...
I'm going to take a wild stab and say Esme for Phil's lover..
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2ecaniagaOho! Skyler, aye? Bit of competition maybe? Or perhaps just a brotherly influence...
I'm going to take a wild stab and say Esme for Phil's lover..
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1/18/2009 c6 2november21
Skyler's dad! The big brother line, the only other American. It would work so well. Though that wouldn't explain Jesse being worried. Huh. Oh, and Skyler seems nice and Jesse and Bella are so cute. Is that kid harassing Alice going to come into the story more often later on? Anyways, I really like this story and can't wait to finally find out.
2november21Skyler's dad! The big brother line, the only other American. It would work so well. Though that wouldn't explain Jesse being worried. Huh. Oh, and Skyler seems nice and Jesse and Bella are so cute. Is that kid harassing Alice going to come into the story more often later on? Anyways, I really like this story and can't wait to finally find out.
1/15/2009 c5 2ecaniaga
Ooh! I have no idea, but I think it's really good that he's not alone anymore, makes it less melancholy ;)
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2ecaniagaOoh! I have no idea, but I think it's really good that he's not alone anymore, makes it less melancholy ;)
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12/7/2008 c4 2ecaniaga
Oh oh ohh! Another lemon, You're on a roll lol!
I'm excited for Alice's reaction when and if Bella tells.
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2ecaniagaOh oh ohh! Another lemon, You're on a roll lol!
I'm excited for Alice's reaction when and if Bella tells.
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12/2/2008 c3 ecaniaga
*Wolf Whistles* Well damn, Lecia! For your first lemon it was pretty hot lol! I so wasn't expecting this, but it was a good turn.
Can't wait to find out what happens next,
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*Wolf Whistles* Well damn, Lecia! For your first lemon it was pretty hot lol! I so wasn't expecting this, but it was a good turn.
Can't wait to find out what happens next,
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12/1/2008 c3 2november21
I feel so bad for Jesse and his friend. And of course for Bella, the leper. Hope the next chapter's up soon.
2november21I feel so bad for Jesse and his friend. And of course for Bella, the leper. Hope the next chapter's up soon.
11/23/2008 c2 november21
Poor Bells. I'm glad you dragged Jasper and Alice in. What happens after school should be interesting.
Poor Bells. I'm glad you dragged Jasper and Alice in. What happens after school should be interesting.
11/22/2008 c2 2ecaniaga
yay! Jasper! Hahaha, I was so excited when Jesse said "and my sister's boyfriend.."
I did a little cheer lol ;)
Great chapter- again. Your spelling and grammer has improved so much! Question- Is this told entirely from Bella's POV?
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2ecaniagayay! Jasper! Hahaha, I was so excited when Jesse said "and my sister's boyfriend.."
I did a little cheer lol ;)
Great chapter- again. Your spelling and grammer has improved so much! Question- Is this told entirely from Bella's POV?
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11/18/2008 c1 ecaniaga
Oh god, what the hell happened to poor Bella! That was so sad, and what was with the guys with swords?
I'm definately interested
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Oh god, what the hell happened to poor Bella! That was so sad, and what was with the guys with swords?
I'm definately interested
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11/18/2008 c1 2november21
Happy birthday! It sounds like it will be a good story. Just wondering, could you put a bit more Jesse in the next chapter so we can learn about him? Looking forward to it.
2november21Happy birthday! It sounds like it will be a good story. Just wondering, could you put a bit more Jesse in the next chapter so we can learn about him? Looking forward to it.