for Demon & Daughter3/10/2017 c1 LankyChunky
Lanky: Thanks for making the first Vocaloid fanfic!
Chunky: /表示されます w
それは素晴らしい話でした！
Lanky: Thanks for making the first Vocaloid fanfic!
Chunky: /表示されます w
それは素晴らしい話でした！
1/4/2015 c1 Guest
The first vocaloid fic! How cool!
The first vocaloid fic! How cool!
4/18/2013 c1 
16Anime-addict-no-1
Awwww this was a really cool story. I haven't heard the song so I thank you for introducing me to another Vocaloid song -
16Anime-addict-no-1Awwww this was a really cool story. I haven't heard the song so I thank you for introducing me to another Vocaloid song -
10/11/2011 c1 Kiki
Aww..What a sad story. :') It really brings out a sad emotion.
Aww..What a sad story. :') It really brings out a sad emotion.
7/3/2011 c1 TinyTeto-chan
Wow I reading this and it's 2011 but I wished he came back like in the youtude vedio.
Wow I reading this and it's 2011 but I wished he came back like in the youtude vedio.
11/18/2010 c1 14akatsukigirl112
5/5 my friend! I love this song and I was actually listening to it while I read this which brought out the true emotion of this song and story even more. You should be proud of yourself, this is the first time I've ever seen a song made in to a story and it turned out a wonderful success for you.
I cried while I read this amazing work of yours and this is, I must say, the first story I've read on this site to made me have some sort of deeper emotion than just that of a reader.
14akatsukigirl1125/5 my friend! I love this song and I was actually listening to it while I read this which brought out the true emotion of this song and story even more. You should be proud of yourself, this is the first time I've ever seen a song made in to a story and it turned out a wonderful success for you.
I cried while I read this amazing work of yours and this is, I must say, the first story I've read on this site to made me have some sort of deeper emotion than just that of a reader.