for Broken6/9/2010 c1 
22PrioritiesSorted
Again, a beautifully excecuted story. Don't know why you lack any confidence, and I am incredulous that you don't have more reviews for your stories.
I would say the person who died was Draco, but in the end it doesn't matter - it's still so touching. The ambiguity of it actually really well portrays all the people who died in the War.
Keep writing!
Lplli xx
22PrioritiesSortedAgain, a beautifully excecuted story. Don't know why you lack any confidence, and I am incredulous that you don't have more reviews for your stories.
I would say the person who died was Draco, but in the end it doesn't matter - it's still so touching. The ambiguity of it actually really well portrays all the people who died in the War.
Keep writing!
Lplli xx
12/4/2008 c1 4parselslyth
Wow...
Is it Draco who died? It was not entirely clear, purposefully I assume.
You captured the emotions perfectly and I loved that it was written in first person - it seemed to add depth to a story that was already an amazing read.
Keep writing. I don't usually read one shots, but this was quite profound.
Well done.
4parselslythWow...
Is it Draco who died? It was not entirely clear, purposefully I assume.
You captured the emotions perfectly and I loved that it was written in first person - it seemed to add depth to a story that was already an amazing read.
Keep writing. I don't usually read one shots, but this was quite profound.
Well done.