12/28/2015 c2 2Phantom Trainer
this was a great story even though it was short. it was just perfect. i will likely end up reading this over and over again. thank you for the great read!
Phantom OUT!
this was a great story even though it was short. it was just perfect. i will likely end up reading this over and over again. thank you for the great read!
Phantom OUT!
7/3/2012 c2 ljvoufoutvojubojvtu
Wow. Just...wow. This story gave me /chills/. I loved it! It was funny, heart-touching, and incredibly sexy at the same time.
You had lots of originality, and things I've never seen before, which is good. I really like the idea of Shiro being turned on by Ichi's pulse. It seems so like him, and yet I'd never even thought of it before.
Good job! I hope you keep writing!
Wow. Just...wow. This story gave me /chills/. I loved it! It was funny, heart-touching, and incredibly sexy at the same time.
You had lots of originality, and things I've never seen before, which is good. I really like the idea of Shiro being turned on by Ichi's pulse. It seems so like him, and yet I'd never even thought of it before.
Good job! I hope you keep writing!
3/5/2011 c2 5YueShirosaki
as you wanted to know if anyone was from LJ, well i am.
Yue_Shirosaki 's my name there.
Anyway nice work ^^.
as you wanted to know if anyone was from LJ, well i am.
Yue_Shirosaki 's my name there.
Anyway nice work ^^.
1/28/2010 c2 22Ell Bee Someone Else Now
I don't care much for explicit yaoi, but I'll make an exception for this brilliantly-written, wryly-titled story ... good stuff.
I don't care much for explicit yaoi, but I'll make an exception for this brilliantly-written, wryly-titled story ... good stuff.
1/28/2010 c1 Ell Bee Someone Else Now
You know, every so often, following some person's favoriting of your own work, you find that they've also favorited the work of someone you really should be reading. That happened to me with this story. When I finish it, I'll be going on to the author's other work, and so should you, fellow reader.
You know, every so often, following some person's favoriting of your own work, you find that they've also favorited the work of someone you really should be reading. That happened to me with this story. When I finish it, I'll be going on to the author's other work, and so should you, fellow reader.
1/15/2010 c2 8Strawberry-Ringo
This two-shot was awesome! I loved the lemon the most though..*giggles*
You have LJ? *looks on your profile* Ah you do! I'm gonna add you! X3 (Sberrychan is my username)
~Strawberry-Ringo
This two-shot was awesome! I loved the lemon the most though..*giggles*
You have LJ? *looks on your profile* Ah you do! I'm gonna add you! X3 (Sberrychan is my username)
~Strawberry-Ringo
12/12/2009 c2 7Vampyra142001
That last part about the 'kink or three' was truely the icing on the cake. Kudos to you for an interesting story and a perfect ending.
That last part about the 'kink or three' was truely the icing on the cake. Kudos to you for an interesting story and a perfect ending.
9/26/2009 c2 18God and the Fox
I enjoyed this story very much. I've read a lot of ShiroxIchi stories, but most people are off on Shirosaki's character by just a bit. But you've got him down perfectly. Great job.
I enjoyed this story very much. I've read a lot of ShiroxIchi stories, but most people are off on Shirosaki's character by just a bit. But you've got him down perfectly. Great job.
8/15/2009 c2 10piratequeen24
cute cute cute cute. I love these two.
I liked how you kept Hichigo in character in terms of him meaning nothing really in dissapearing from the dreams, but that he's just a creature of whim. I don't know if that makes sense, but that's what I got out of it.
Well written too, which is always lovely. :)
Nice work!
cute cute cute cute. I love these two.
I liked how you kept Hichigo in character in terms of him meaning nothing really in dissapearing from the dreams, but that he's just a creature of whim. I don't know if that makes sense, but that's what I got out of it.
Well written too, which is always lovely. :)
Nice work!