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11/20/2008 c1 17darkorangecat
I like how you break the rythm with the single syllable in the line, "Don't." It makes the line that comes before it all that much stronger and works well in drawing attention to that particular pair of lines. It reminds me of Dean and Sam's relationship and the relationship that an older sibling has with his or her younger siblings in general.

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