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12/26/2011 c1 10Future Forensic
awww thats soooo sad =( tear
5/23/2011 c1 3TulipNixphe
aw
1/22/2009 c1 56Katheryn Mae
I didn't review? I could have sworn I've read it before. Well, I read morethanacrush's "The Game" on the ADMM boards and had to come read this afterwards. Just beautiful - tingly feelings all over. xD
1/15/2009 c1 6FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A
That was so cute! Very short-normally I would never read something this short, but the summary and reviews caught my eye anyway, and I'm glad I stuck around. I like the whole appearance vs. reality thing-it enhances the message of the actual seeing isn't believing type thing. Not a very eloquent way of putting it, but I didn't know how else to say that...
12/23/2008 c1 8Ilse O'Hara
This was incredible. I am dead serious. Your writing style leaves me enamored. This fic is sadly not receiving enough attention. I can only wish that mine could ever be this good (as it is it needs to be rewritten, and quickly) but I digress. This is incredible. Thank you so much for sharing your gift.
11/28/2008 c1 21Stefdarlin
This is a wonderful picture you have painted of their lives. I agree with Di, I am wondering if there is more. =o)

It is happy but poignant at the same time. And I am very happy that the lives they show, and the lives they live are so very different!

Cheers,

Stef =o)
11/26/2008 c1 103Missing Linka
Wonderful idea!

But you should rate it "General/Romance" ... Otherwise people looking for ADMM might not find it ...

I loved the Quidditch sentence! ;-)

THX

God bless you!

Thara
11/25/2008 c1 55OSUSprinks
Wow! I really loved this! The symmetry was very cool. I could see them in the picture from your descriptions. It was very heartwarming and incredibly sad at the same time. Thank you so much for sharing!
11/23/2008 c1 iluvcheer27
ohh i like i like... good job =]
11/22/2008 c1 12Ogehsim
Beautiful. Short, sweet, and to the point.

10/10
11/21/2008 c1 13Sophia Anya Lee
This is a brilliant piece! The repition, rather than becoming annoying, goes very well with the whole idea of the fic. The story was not overly descriptive, well-balanced with description and emotion. The recurring 'instead they saw' provided beautiful insights as to how students see Minerva and Albus.

Of course, we MMADers know the truth. :P

Keep up the great work, this is going in my faves.
11/21/2008 c1 3anberry
Wow...

Nice writing conventions you got there...

Love the contrast and simplicity of it! ^_^ It's quite the perfect piece of creative writing...
11/21/2008 c1 24DEACTIVEDUSER
Good story,I liked the way you pointed out the obvious things but also discreet hints.
11/21/2008 c1 49BandGeek58407
I really liked this; the repetition works very nicely! Great job. ^_^

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