for They Wouldn't See1/22/2009 c1 
56Katheryn Mae
I didn't review? I could have sworn I've read it before. Well, I read morethanacrush's "The Game" on the ADMM boards and had to come read this afterwards. Just beautiful - tingly feelings all over. xD
56Katheryn MaeI didn't review? I could have sworn I've read it before. Well, I read morethanacrush's "The Game" on the ADMM boards and had to come read this afterwards. Just beautiful - tingly feelings all over. xD
1/15/2009 c1 6FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A
That was so cute! Very short-normally I would never read something this short, but the summary and reviews caught my eye anyway, and I'm glad I stuck around. I like the whole appearance vs. reality thing-it enhances the message of the actual seeing isn't believing type thing. Not a very eloquent way of putting it, but I didn't know how else to say that...
6FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.AThat was so cute! Very short-normally I would never read something this short, but the summary and reviews caught my eye anyway, and I'm glad I stuck around. I like the whole appearance vs. reality thing-it enhances the message of the actual seeing isn't believing type thing. Not a very eloquent way of putting it, but I didn't know how else to say that...
12/23/2008 c1 8Ilse O'Hara
This was incredible. I am dead serious. Your writing style leaves me enamored. This fic is sadly not receiving enough attention. I can only wish that mine could ever be this good (as it is it needs to be rewritten, and quickly) but I digress. This is incredible. Thank you so much for sharing your gift.
8Ilse O'HaraThis was incredible. I am dead serious. Your writing style leaves me enamored. This fic is sadly not receiving enough attention. I can only wish that mine could ever be this good (as it is it needs to be rewritten, and quickly) but I digress. This is incredible. Thank you so much for sharing your gift.
11/28/2008 c1 21Stefdarlin
This is a wonderful picture you have painted of their lives. I agree with Di, I am wondering if there is more. =o)
It is happy but poignant at the same time. And I am very happy that the lives they show, and the lives they live are so very different!
Cheers,
Stef =o)
21StefdarlinThis is a wonderful picture you have painted of their lives. I agree with Di, I am wondering if there is more. =o)
It is happy but poignant at the same time. And I am very happy that the lives they show, and the lives they live are so very different!
Cheers,
Stef =o)
11/26/2008 c1 103Missing Linka
Wonderful idea!
But you should rate it "General/Romance" ... Otherwise people looking for ADMM might not find it ...
I loved the Quidditch sentence! ;-)
THX
God bless you!
Thara
103Missing LinkaWonderful idea!
But you should rate it "General/Romance" ... Otherwise people looking for ADMM might not find it ...
I loved the Quidditch sentence! ;-)
THX
God bless you!
Thara
11/25/2008 c1 55OSUSprinks
Wow! I really loved this! The symmetry was very cool. I could see them in the picture from your descriptions. It was very heartwarming and incredibly sad at the same time. Thank you so much for sharing!
55OSUSprinksWow! I really loved this! The symmetry was very cool. I could see them in the picture from your descriptions. It was very heartwarming and incredibly sad at the same time. Thank you so much for sharing!
11/21/2008 c1 13Sophia Anya Lee
This is a brilliant piece! The repition, rather than becoming annoying, goes very well with the whole idea of the fic. The story was not overly descriptive, well-balanced with description and emotion. The recurring 'instead they saw' provided beautiful insights as to how students see Minerva and Albus.
Of course, we MMADers know the truth. :P
Keep up the great work, this is going in my faves.
13Sophia Anya LeeThis is a brilliant piece! The repition, rather than becoming annoying, goes very well with the whole idea of the fic. The story was not overly descriptive, well-balanced with description and emotion. The recurring 'instead they saw' provided beautiful insights as to how students see Minerva and Albus.
Of course, we MMADers know the truth. :P
Keep up the great work, this is going in my faves.
11/21/2008 c1 3anberry
Wow...
Nice writing conventions you got there...
Love the contrast and simplicity of it! ^_^ It's quite the perfect piece of creative writing...
3anberryWow...
Nice writing conventions you got there...
Love the contrast and simplicity of it! ^_^ It's quite the perfect piece of creative writing...
11/21/2008 c1 24DEACTIVEDUSER
Good story,I liked the way you pointed out the obvious things but also discreet hints.
24DEACTIVEDUSERGood story,I liked the way you pointed out the obvious things but also discreet hints.