for Beyond Twisted Love5/30/2013 c1 
5Lone Angel in a Trenchcoat
Sniffle...Why'd you kill him, Beyond? Just kill Raito; he was going to end up killing L anyways.
:wipes away tears: Anyways, it was beautifully written.
5Lone Angel in a TrenchcoatSniffle...Why'd you kill him, Beyond? Just kill Raito; he was going to end up killing L anyways.
:wipes away tears: Anyways, it was beautifully written.
2/18/2010 c1 TeamHitachiin
Aw poor L :(
Aw poor L :(
10/16/2009 c1 42randomppl
OMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS :O!
and L can save Light!
and then they can have a threesome :-)
42randompplOMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS :O!
and L can save Light!
and then they can have a threesome :-)
6/21/2009 c1 SorryAccountHasBeenDeleted
I want your babies. FACT!
Seriously, this was so intense and sexy and...and wow!
I loved it! It was so emotional and it included two of my favourite pairings! BB/L and Light/L!
I'm actually torn now...I want you to carry on and have L save Light and they all have an emotional, lovey dovey scene where Light asks L in such a heart-breaking way, why L shouted out Beyond's name...
...and then I also think you should leave it as a one-shot as it's perfect on it's own...
GAH! I want it to carry on and yet I love it as a one-shot!
Hehehehe...this is the first story to make me feel so torn! I love it!
Love City Girl...x
I want your babies. FACT!
Seriously, this was so intense and sexy and...and wow!
I loved it! It was so emotional and it included two of my favourite pairings! BB/L and Light/L!
I'm actually torn now...I want you to carry on and have L save Light and they all have an emotional, lovey dovey scene where Light asks L in such a heart-breaking way, why L shouted out Beyond's name...
...and then I also think you should leave it as a one-shot as it's perfect on it's own...
GAH! I want it to carry on and yet I love it as a one-shot!
Hehehehe...this is the first story to make me feel so torn! I love it!
Love City Girl...x
2/11/2009 c1 2GiggleSnortBangDead
Oh, dear God, you MUST update this soon! I am absolutely dying of antici...pation.
2GiggleSnortBangDeadOh, dear God, you MUST update this soon! I am absolutely dying of antici...pation.
2/11/2009 c1 AvengingMyInnocence
Okay, first off... EW! :P
lol
Yeah, most definately you should continue this. It's freakish and so entirely twisted my hormones have fallen in twisted gruesome love with it!
Please, write more!
Nora
(and the buns)
Okay, first off... EW! :P
lol
Yeah, most definately you should continue this. It's freakish and so entirely twisted my hormones have fallen in twisted gruesome love with it!
Please, write more!
Nora
(and the buns)
12/30/2008 c1 15Anastasia Keehl
Owh... Another 'eww...' story. My nose! -nosebleed-
back to the review, umm... I think, you must continue this story! I wanna know the next story... XD
UPDATE! AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! XD
15Anastasia KeehlOwh... Another 'eww...' story. My nose! -nosebleed-
back to the review, umm... I think, you must continue this story! I wanna know the next story... XD
UPDATE! AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! XD
12/25/2008 c1 L13R18N32
Okay, I have no idea who Beyond is, I didn't watch the series that long. But I still loved the light bondage and rape ^-^
Okay, I have no idea who Beyond is, I didn't watch the series that long. But I still loved the light bondage and rape ^-^
12/7/2008 c1 Heiwajimanon
Oh it was really god ~
Added to favourites
But I must know what happens next so update, okay ;]
I DIDN'T WANT B TO DIE THOUGH WA
T^T;
AND LOL I LAUGHED SO HARD WHEN IT SAID B WAS COMMANDO.
ROFLOL.
X
Oh it was really god ~
Added to favourites
But I must know what happens next so update, okay ;]
I DIDN'T WANT B TO DIE THOUGH WA
T^T;
AND LOL I LAUGHED SO HARD WHEN IT SAID B WAS COMMANDO.
ROFLOL.
X
11/25/2008 c1 10Goddess of the Moonlit Sky
Very awesome idea. Poor Raito...NOT! Please tell me Misa isn't going to be in this...
10Goddess of the Moonlit SkyVery awesome idea. Poor Raito...NOT! Please tell me Misa isn't going to be in this...