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1/2/2017 c1 Buddy5647
Granted that everyone has their own view of the relationship between each of the team members with the others, I think you are way off base with regard to the conclusions she reached regarding Abby and McGee. Being a TiVa, you probably dismiss anybody but tony as irrelevant and able to be casually dismissed and thrown out. I think even show writers realize there is a team relationship, but again, here they are dismissed as shallow and stupid. I rarely read TIVA for this reason and the fact that tony makes my skin crawl
I don't think this story does anything but make everybody but tony lok shallow and stupid. I am disappointed that I even took the time to read it.
11/24/2008 c1 66M E Wofford
Oh, loved the end.

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They just need to get together DARN IT.
11/24/2008 c1 40evincis
Good job. i liked it. Especially the last part. It was so sweet.

I think that you should write a sequel. Tony and Ziva talk and they reveal their feelings.
11/24/2008 c1 36Nemisses
Nice, it more to come ?
11/23/2008 c1 argentwolfwing
Short, but beautiful. Keep writing!

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