
12/16/2011 c1 dash
it was good but the poem was to short
it was good but the poem was to short
11/27/2008 c1
9Anily AKW-DPP
great work for a first timer!
you managed to keep the personality of the characters while having them in a scene that wouldn't most likely actually happen to them- unlike me when i started being a fanfic writer (they ended up really OOC, can't believe my work has even gotten better from there)
did the poem effect the other -to me- annoying people, such as other bullies or even Paulina?
keep on writing
anily

great work for a first timer!
you managed to keep the personality of the characters while having them in a scene that wouldn't most likely actually happen to them- unlike me when i started being a fanfic writer (they ended up really OOC, can't believe my work has even gotten better from there)
did the poem effect the other -to me- annoying people, such as other bullies or even Paulina?
keep on writing
anily