for Love in an elevator11/30/2008 c2 naryachan
I like this chapter, and the form that makes us to put inside the history.
I'm waiting for the next chapter, please continue.
I like this chapter, and the form that makes us to put inside the history.
I'm waiting for the next chapter, please continue.
11/30/2008 c2 
2amukay
Excellent chapter!
The Beta reader was wonderful (hehehee!)
I can't wait to see the next chapter - please update soon as this is such an awesome story.
Anyway, yeah, you already know I love your story but I thought I'd review anyway ;]
2amukayExcellent chapter!
The Beta reader was wonderful (hehehee!)
I can't wait to see the next chapter - please update soon as this is such an awesome story.
Anyway, yeah, you already know I love your story but I thought I'd review anyway ;]
11/29/2008 c1 26Sighned-Anonymous
OMG that was fantabulous. continue please! - A
I woud be honored if you continued, why? i would get to read an excellent story! - N
A and N
26Sighned-AnonymousOMG that was fantabulous. continue please! - A
I woud be honored if you continued, why? i would get to read an excellent story! - N
A and N
11/28/2008 c1 2amukay
I really liked it mostly :)
Your stories are interesting.. but I thought Yuuki revealing herself as a vampire was a bit rushed, and there didn't seem to be any tension between them.
Kaname should be able to tell she's a pureblood just by her scent anyway, he shouldn't have had to ask.
Have you made them both unrelated then? You were talking about Yuuki's uncle, Rido right? But he's a Kuran - and so's Kaname. I was a bit confused on that.
You need to get yourself a Beta reader to correct your sentance structure, it's a little clumsy in places.
Plus Yuuki wouldn't call him -sama if she's also a pureblood.
I don't mind doing it for you if you're interested.
I really hope you continue this - I would like to see their relationship develop.
You can't leave it there! *cries*
I have to see Kaname and Yuuki meeting again.
Hope my review helped?
2amukayI really liked it mostly :)
Your stories are interesting.. but I thought Yuuki revealing herself as a vampire was a bit rushed, and there didn't seem to be any tension between them.
Kaname should be able to tell she's a pureblood just by her scent anyway, he shouldn't have had to ask.
Have you made them both unrelated then? You were talking about Yuuki's uncle, Rido right? But he's a Kuran - and so's Kaname. I was a bit confused on that.
You need to get yourself a Beta reader to correct your sentance structure, it's a little clumsy in places.
Plus Yuuki wouldn't call him -sama if she's also a pureblood.
I don't mind doing it for you if you're interested.
I really hope you continue this - I would like to see their relationship develop.
You can't leave it there! *cries*
I have to see Kaname and Yuuki meeting again.
Hope my review helped?
11/28/2008 c1 UniQueMimI O.B.S.E.S.S.I.O.N
Super good! yes i want u to continue
it was a great story all together
Super good! yes i want u to continue
it was a great story all together