for when vampire meets witch10/6/2009 c1 
3Wrandom Writer
Sounds interesting, but you really need to watch your puncuation. It kinda makes reading it confusing and annoying...SO when you get a chance, you should undoubtedly go back and edit your conventions.
3Wrandom WriterSounds interesting, but you really need to watch your puncuation. It kinda makes reading it confusing and annoying...SO when you get a chance, you should undoubtedly go back and edit your conventions.
9/5/2009 c15 Belle08
Loving this! Edward's a jerk though
you don't say you exs name! Please don't make us
wait long for another chapter!
Loving this! Edward's a jerk though
you don't say you exs name! Please don't make us
wait long for another chapter!
3/3/2009 c13 Belle08
I'm absolute inlove with this story. You don't see many EdwardOc stories. Love it!
Update soon!
I'm absolute inlove with this story. You don't see many EdwardOc stories. Love it!
Update soon!
2/17/2009 c12 14crazedchick
Oh no what is Chase up to. Yay to the Kaycee/Edward moment...I can't wait for more so update soon.
14crazedchickOh no what is Chase up to. Yay to the Kaycee/Edward moment...I can't wait for more so update soon.
2/14/2009 c7 4LucyLuMcarty-Cullen
I like this story. The crossover is one I haven't seen yet, but it is cool so far.
I did notice that there were some grammer mistakes throughout, I would advise you to get a Beta Reader, just for some extra help with the little things, but still, you are doing a great job with the story!
-Sam♥
4LucyLuMcarty-CullenI like this story. The crossover is one I haven't seen yet, but it is cool so far.
I did notice that there were some grammer mistakes throughout, I would advise you to get a Beta Reader, just for some extra help with the little things, but still, you are doing a great job with the story!
-Sam♥
2/10/2009 c10 14crazedchick
Once again another amazing chapter. Kaycee and Edward are so stubborn lol!
Can't wait for more so please update more a.s.a.p!
14crazedchickOnce again another amazing chapter. Kaycee and Edward are so stubborn lol!
Can't wait for more so please update more a.s.a.p!
2/9/2009 c8 5airali
i think this is an awesome story it is very creative.
keep up the goodwork
personally i like the first person point of view better
i feel like i can learn more about the character like that
5airalii think this is an awesome story it is very creative.
keep up the goodwork
personally i like the first person point of view better
i feel like i can learn more about the character like that
2/6/2009 c9 14crazedchick
Great chapter. Mike is such a bastard! I mean I understand him being a little peeved when he found out he was being used but what he did was out of order. Thank god Edward was there to save the day.
Please update more soon.
14crazedchickGreat chapter. Mike is such a bastard! I mean I understand him being a little peeved when he found out he was being used but what he did was out of order. Thank god Edward was there to save the day.
Please update more soon.
2/3/2009 c8 crazedchick
This story is great. I absolutely love Kaycee!
I prefer the story in third person...i'm not to sure why but I thought i'd let you know.
Please update more soon.
This story is great. I absolutely love Kaycee!
I prefer the story in third person...i'm not to sure why but I thought i'd let you know.
Please update more soon.