for The missing piece12/26/2010 c12 
5Iriomote Yamaneko Nokomis
yay! u updated! poor chris a meal with the family so soon! XD if u really need someone to kick your butt to write i would be glad to volunteer. lol can't wait till next update!
5Iriomote Yamaneko Nokomisyay! u updated! poor chris a meal with the family so soon! XD if u really need someone to kick your butt to write i would be glad to volunteer. lol can't wait till next update!
10/1/2010 c11 steven
i really like this storie,i hope you update soon,you are an awesome writer,have a awesome day,
i really like this storie,i hope you update soon,you are an awesome writer,have a awesome day,
9/26/2010 c11 12Ichigo Mirai
this is really really good! wonder what'll happen next... please update soon!
12Ichigo Miraithis is really really good! wonder what'll happen next... please update soon!
8/31/2010 c7 Sitanya
Well, I love the idea of Chriss and Edward, but this chapter it a little too... strange.
Maybe it's the fact that ALL the family assist the scene, which makes it a little uncomfortable. And there's also the fact that they are already holding hands... and the only thing they know is each other's name. It's a little too much out of character for Edward.
Well, I love the idea of Chriss and Edward, but this chapter it a little too... strange.
Maybe it's the fact that ALL the family assist the scene, which makes it a little uncomfortable. And there's also the fact that they are already holding hands... and the only thing they know is each other's name. It's a little too much out of character for Edward.
8/18/2010 c11 redrobin
well, it's about time you updated and of course you'll always have me as a loyal reader (as long as you continue to update and keep writing). as always update soon okay.
r*r
well, it's about time you updated and of course you'll always have me as a loyal reader (as long as you continue to update and keep writing). as always update soon okay.
r*r
8/4/2010 c11 xXFreedom-ReaderXx
Wow it seems like forever since I last read this fic. Great come back chapter :D I can't wait to read more.
P.S. Chris and Edward are soooo CUTE together.
Wow it seems like forever since I last read this fic. Great come back chapter :D I can't wait to read more.
P.S. Chris and Edward are soooo CUTE together.
8/3/2010 c11 JinKa7
^;^ I can't wait to find out what happens at the meeting at the Cullens' house. And Chris was so cute with his nervousness.
I guess I'll meet you on the flipside, or at least whenever you next update.
^;^ I can't wait to find out what happens at the meeting at the Cullens' house. And Chris was so cute with his nervousness.
I guess I'll meet you on the flipside, or at least whenever you next update.
8/3/2010 c11 5blo0d StaiNed Rose
i am soo happy that you updated...its been such a long time that i though you abandomned this story...i cant wait for more...this was sooo short, i think you r torturing me ;p update soon please :D
5blo0d StaiNed Rosei am soo happy that you updated...its been such a long time that i though you abandomned this story...i cant wait for more...this was sooo short, i think you r torturing me ;p update soon please :D
8/2/2010 c11 gaia artemis
I was waiting for an update and was so happy when i got the e-mail alert. Hope for another one soon...I love this story line
I was waiting for an update and was so happy when i got the e-mail alert. Hope for another one soon...I love this story line
8/2/2010 c11 Kitsune Rose420
I totally loved this chapter-and the whole story so far. My only suggestion? WRITE MORE AND UPDATE MORE! (I'm being a hyporcite ordering that of anybody, considering that I never update but once a year, but still)
I totally loved this chapter-and the whole story so far. My only suggestion? WRITE MORE AND UPDATE MORE! (I'm being a hyporcite ordering that of anybody, considering that I never update but once a year, but still)