
10/17/2009 c1 xNINJABLADE45x
yes that was sweet but very cheesy but the good kind of cheesy great one shoot
yes that was sweet but very cheesy but the good kind of cheesy great one shoot
12/14/2008 c1
7ricreaper
tis' the season to be jolly(naruto's going to be jolly for a long time). hehehe nice story.

tis' the season to be jolly(naruto's going to be jolly for a long time). hehehe nice story.
11/30/2008 c1 pittsteel
aw. that was soo cute. i love it!
aw. that was soo cute. i love it!
11/29/2008 c1
1peytah112
aww that was rly cute. nd very smart on sakuras part with the scarf haha. great one-shot. i really enjoyed reading it. It was very well written

aww that was rly cute. nd very smart on sakuras part with the scarf haha. great one-shot. i really enjoyed reading it. It was very well written
11/29/2008 c1
13narusakufan1985
This is a cute story. Please make some more. Naruto and Sakura forever.

This is a cute story. Please make some more. Naruto and Sakura forever.
11/29/2008 c1
8Jho
That was pretty sweet, didn't know what to expect, but it was a pretty nice story.
Just a couple of things I wish you had done: Maybe explain why the mission was so dangerous or at least have a dialogue about why he was able to come back so quickly. I felt that part was kind of left out and ignored. Like you could have made it dramatic where Naruto got into a fight scene where the outcome was uncertain, and then flash it back to him being able to make it back to Konoha. Just my 2 cents.

That was pretty sweet, didn't know what to expect, but it was a pretty nice story.
Just a couple of things I wish you had done: Maybe explain why the mission was so dangerous or at least have a dialogue about why he was able to come back so quickly. I felt that part was kind of left out and ignored. Like you could have made it dramatic where Naruto got into a fight scene where the outcome was uncertain, and then flash it back to him being able to make it back to Konoha. Just my 2 cents.