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5/31/2014 c1 1Dbzgirl1011
All the cuteness x)
11/26/2009 c1 creativesm75
nice
10/17/2009 c1 xNINJABLADE45x
yes that was sweet but very cheesy but the good kind of cheesy great one shoot
6/2/2009 c1 NarutoRocks21113043
That was soo nice, thanks for posting this uplifting story!
12/31/2008 c1 Rosco90
great job
12/14/2008 c1 7ricreaper
tis' the season to be jolly(naruto's going to be jolly for a long time). hehehe nice story.
12/12/2008 c1 1KagetsukiVII
needs to be longer alot longer
11/30/2008 c1 pittsteel
aw. that was soo cute. i love it!
11/30/2008 c1 RSfan
ow so cute.
11/29/2008 c1 1peytah112
aww that was rly cute. nd very smart on sakuras part with the scarf haha. great one-shot. i really enjoyed reading it. It was very well written
11/29/2008 c1 13narusakufan1985
This is a cute story. Please make some more. Naruto and Sakura forever.
11/29/2008 c1 JovialShogun
That was sweet. And it was good. I really enjoyed it.
11/29/2008 c1 8Jho
That was pretty sweet, didn't know what to expect, but it was a pretty nice story.

Just a couple of things I wish you had done: Maybe explain why the mission was so dangerous or at least have a dialogue about why he was able to come back so quickly. I felt that part was kind of left out and ignored. Like you could have made it dramatic where Naruto got into a fight scene where the outcome was uncertain, and then flash it back to him being able to make it back to Konoha. Just my 2 cents.

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