
12/3/2008 c4
10arosynose
That is so cute! Edward's stomach, I mean. Somehow...the whole thing just makes him even more endearing-is that even possible? XD

That is so cute! Edward's stomach, I mean. Somehow...the whole thing just makes him even more endearing-is that even possible? XD
11/30/2008 c2
17knight-of-cookies
great story so far. You set a good foundation for the characters and I like Victoria. She's very real. Your style is cool.
I can't wait to see how you portray Edward and his meeting with Victoria.

great story so far. You set a good foundation for the characters and I like Victoria. She's very real. Your style is cool.
I can't wait to see how you portray Edward and his meeting with Victoria.