for Blue, Blue Eyes8/17/2010 c3 AdvanceShipper4Eva
Re-reading those reviews, maybe my friend wrote them (she has a very dirty mind), she was staying over at my place and because I am the only person that uses fanfic.net I have it set to remember me... anyway she had been searching through my favourited sites so maybe she found this, read it and put that dirty mind to work... As I have said before, as far as I am aware the only ones I remember writing apart from my various apologies were: Reviews for Chapters 11 & 6...
Re-reading those reviews, maybe my friend wrote them (she has a very dirty mind), she was staying over at my place and because I am the only person that uses fanfic.net I have it set to remember me... anyway she had been searching through my favourited sites so maybe she found this, read it and put that dirty mind to work... As I have said before, as far as I am aware the only ones I remember writing apart from my various apologies were: Reviews for Chapters 11 & 6...
8/9/2010 c2 AdvanceShipper4Eva
Just to correct myself:
Chapters 11 & 6 were the first few reviews that were any good...
The Japanese *sort of* ...
... *fic* ... (not fix)
Just to correct myself:
Chapters 11 & 6 were the first few reviews that were any good...
The Japanese *sort of* ...
... *fic* ... (not fix)
8/9/2010 c1 AdvanceShipper4Eva
Just to let you know anonymous reviews are disabled...
Why is it that you are the only one to produce a multi-chaptered LiefxDain story? You and LadyLapisLazuli are about the only ones with decent LiefxDain stories... I have chapters 2-11 copied into 'NOTES' on my iPod because you are such a fabulous writer... You left the ending of chapter 11 a cliff hanger... I'm sorry about the other reviews, sleep deprivation does that to a girl... Though the first few I meant, sort of, as much as you can mean that sort of thing about a fictional character... (the first few are chapter 11 & 10 I think...) Dain is a wonderful character though... The Japanese sortbof ruined him when the were adapting deltora quest into an anime... He DOES NOT have purple eyes! He has the most beautiful chocolate brown eyes...
Do you have a copy of maze of the beast handy? If so what colour is Dain's hair? I'm trying to write a fix of my own and I need Dain's hair colour... Curse this Godforsaken forgetful mind of mine!
You are the only person to be able to bring Dain "back" without it seeming unrealistic and stupid...
Dain's betrayal truly shocked me at first but this made it all better... Dain and Lief are sooo good together... Are you almost done writing chapter 12? My Blue, Blue Eyes desire more... Yes I do have blue eyes the just aren't as blue as Lief's... Mine are only cornflower blue not a deep, penetrating sapphire blue *pouts and complains*.
I'm sleep deprived again so I'd better finish this up before I enter another of my lustful tirades over Dain.
Just to let you know anonymous reviews are disabled...
Why is it that you are the only one to produce a multi-chaptered LiefxDain story? You and LadyLapisLazuli are about the only ones with decent LiefxDain stories... I have chapters 2-11 copied into 'NOTES' on my iPod because you are such a fabulous writer... You left the ending of chapter 11 a cliff hanger... I'm sorry about the other reviews, sleep deprivation does that to a girl... Though the first few I meant, sort of, as much as you can mean that sort of thing about a fictional character... (the first few are chapter 11 & 10 I think...) Dain is a wonderful character though... The Japanese sortbof ruined him when the were adapting deltora quest into an anime... He DOES NOT have purple eyes! He has the most beautiful chocolate brown eyes...
Do you have a copy of maze of the beast handy? If so what colour is Dain's hair? I'm trying to write a fix of my own and I need Dain's hair colour... Curse this Godforsaken forgetful mind of mine!
You are the only person to be able to bring Dain "back" without it seeming unrealistic and stupid...
Dain's betrayal truly shocked me at first but this made it all better... Dain and Lief are sooo good together... Are you almost done writing chapter 12? My Blue, Blue Eyes desire more... Yes I do have blue eyes the just aren't as blue as Lief's... Mine are only cornflower blue not a deep, penetrating sapphire blue *pouts and complains*.
I'm sleep deprived again so I'd better finish this up before I enter another of my lustful tirades over Dain.
8/5/2010 c6 AdvanceShipper4Eva
So many spelling and grammar problems, must be tired cause I am generally wonderful at English
Yes I am aware that Dain is a fictional character but I'm allowed a harmless infatuation with fictional characters every so often
My Dain
Wake me up
(Bid my blood to run)
I can't wake up
(Before I come undone)
Save me
(Save me from the nothing I've become)
I have blue, blue eyes just like Lief...
We do what we must
Because we can
I'm not even angry
I'm being so sincere right now
Even though you broke my heart
And killed me
And tore me to pieces
And threw every piece into a fire
As they burned it hurt because
I was so happy for you!
So many spelling and grammar problems, must be tired cause I am generally wonderful at English
Yes I am aware that Dain is a fictional character but I'm allowed a harmless infatuation with fictional characters every so often
My Dain
Wake me up
(Bid my blood to run)
I can't wake up
(Before I come undone)
Save me
(Save me from the nothing I've become)
I have blue, blue eyes just like Lief...
We do what we must
Because we can
I'm not even angry
I'm being so sincere right now
Even though you broke my heart
And killed me
And tore me to pieces
And threw every piece into a fire
As they burned it hurt because
I was so happy for you!
8/3/2010 c7 AdvanceShipper4Eva
Reading over what I wrote before, I guess that was the sleep deprivation talking, or maybe not 'cause I do love said embodiment of evil.
I must still be deprived of my beauty sleep 'cause I'm about to launch into another long, emotional tirade over MY Dain.
Dain, stop it please... ok just one kiss... I'm doing something... I said one kiss Dain not a dozen... Fine I'll give in but I must finish this later.
Darling, Darling, Dain! Where are you my love, I feel so cold and empty sitting here alone. *slam*. Dain your here this is wonderful
*thoughts travel to those willowy hands, soft lips and perfect hips*
(It's a good thing I'm in permanent state of swoon otherwise I wouldn't be able to hold myself upright)
Those lean, tight muscles of his back loosened in the embrace I enveloped him in, showing my love for him the only way I could, that embrace, as Dain kissed me within the embrace I felt my legs turn to jelly and my insides to mush, a warm loving mush.
Plz note that Dain is MINE and MINE alone, no-one else is to touch him.
Horrifingly painful death awaits all who ignore this
Reading over what I wrote before, I guess that was the sleep deprivation talking, or maybe not 'cause I do love said embodiment of evil.
I must still be deprived of my beauty sleep 'cause I'm about to launch into another long, emotional tirade over MY Dain.
Dain, stop it please... ok just one kiss... I'm doing something... I said one kiss Dain not a dozen... Fine I'll give in but I must finish this later.
Darling, Darling, Dain! Where are you my love, I feel so cold and empty sitting here alone. *slam*. Dain your here this is wonderful
*thoughts travel to those willowy hands, soft lips and perfect hips*
(It's a good thing I'm in permanent state of swoon otherwise I wouldn't be able to hold myself upright)
Those lean, tight muscles of his back loosened in the embrace I enveloped him in, showing my love for him the only way I could, that embrace, as Dain kissed me within the embrace I felt my legs turn to jelly and my insides to mush, a warm loving mush.
Plz note that Dain is MINE and MINE alone, no-one else is to touch him.
Horrifingly painful death awaits all who ignore this
8/3/2010 c8 AdvanceShipper4Eva
Dain's hips are wonderful, maybe you can beg me to tell you just how wonderful they really are, but maybe you should ask him instead 'cause I'm not talking to another about my lover like that without some pretty hefty bribes.
Dain is sooo HOT and such a lustful creature, just like me, although I have eyes only for my Dain, plenty of others have competed for my affections but they died horrorific, painful deaths at mine and my lover's hands...
Dain doesn't make me wear that ugly stuff he makes Lief wear, I wear tiny, short, tight dresses to accentuate these curves of mine...
Remember I belong to my Dain and you need to get a life if you are swooning over the mental image I just painted in your mind. I am making love to my Dain now so if you don't mind, we'd like a little privacy.
Oohh... Dain how wonderful to finally be with you again.
I've been left alone to my lustful thoughts...
*Claps hands an lights in suite flicker and sputter out*
Leaving Dain and I continue in the privacy of the darkness
Dain's hips are wonderful, maybe you can beg me to tell you just how wonderful they really are, but maybe you should ask him instead 'cause I'm not talking to another about my lover like that without some pretty hefty bribes.
Dain is sooo HOT and such a lustful creature, just like me, although I have eyes only for my Dain, plenty of others have competed for my affections but they died horrorific, painful deaths at mine and my lover's hands...
Dain doesn't make me wear that ugly stuff he makes Lief wear, I wear tiny, short, tight dresses to accentuate these curves of mine...
Remember I belong to my Dain and you need to get a life if you are swooning over the mental image I just painted in your mind. I am making love to my Dain now so if you don't mind, we'd like a little privacy.
Oohh... Dain how wonderful to finally be with you again.
I've been left alone to my lustful thoughts...
*Claps hands an lights in suite flicker and sputter out*
Leaving Dain and I continue in the privacy of the darkness
8/3/2010 c9 AdvanceShipper4Eva
Now if only you could continue this story because I love this Ol named Dain
*Pleasant lustful shiver down spine*
You are to prevent anyone other than Lief and I touching Dain...
Dain is mine and he always will be, though I guess I have to share him with this pleasure servant of his... *pouts really sweetly* ... couldn't said pleasure servant die in tragic accident? Plz...
Faithfully
AdvanceShipper4Eva
You will lose the ability to write so well if anyone else touches, or better yet, talks to MY Dain suggestively.
THIS IS NOT AN IDLE THREAT! YOU SHALL DO AS I SAY OR DIE A HORRIBLE, PAINFUL DEATH BY MY LOVER'S HAND!
(had you not caught on Dain is this lover of which I speak. I hope you remember the description of death at the hands of an Ol... for all you know I may well be an Ol myself... a grade 3 one of course otherwise Dain would pay no attention to me whatsoever and I would be likely to die at his hands... Which are soft and just as willowy as described, his lips are just as soft too *swoons again* my darling lover is more dangerous to you and Lief than to me so please keep that in mind)
Now if only you could continue this story because I love this Ol named Dain
*Pleasant lustful shiver down spine*
You are to prevent anyone other than Lief and I touching Dain...
Dain is mine and he always will be, though I guess I have to share him with this pleasure servant of his... *pouts really sweetly* ... couldn't said pleasure servant die in tragic accident? Plz...
Faithfully
AdvanceShipper4Eva
You will lose the ability to write so well if anyone else touches, or better yet, talks to MY Dain suggestively.
THIS IS NOT AN IDLE THREAT! YOU SHALL DO AS I SAY OR DIE A HORRIBLE, PAINFUL DEATH BY MY LOVER'S HAND!
(had you not caught on Dain is this lover of which I speak. I hope you remember the description of death at the hands of an Ol... for all you know I may well be an Ol myself... a grade 3 one of course otherwise Dain would pay no attention to me whatsoever and I would be likely to die at his hands... Which are soft and just as willowy as described, his lips are just as soft too *swoons again* my darling lover is more dangerous to you and Lief than to me so please keep that in mind)
8/3/2010 c10 AdvanceShipper4Eva
My Blue, Blue eyes need more, more I say *goes completely and utterly mad with lust for Dain*
I don't care that Dain is evil, a liar or even heartless.
I think I love this Deltora Acknowleges Ignoramuses Naturally
Dain is HOT ... And he's all mine, mine I tell u mine, only Lief can touch him (other than me of course) *still completely and utterly crazy about Dain*
Your lovely pal
AdvanceShipper4Eva
*No-one is to touch MY Dain - yes he is mine now*
Finished Chapter 11 - still swooning only I can only review once
My Blue, Blue eyes need more, more I say *goes completely and utterly mad with lust for Dain*
I don't care that Dain is evil, a liar or even heartless.
I think I love this Deltora Acknowleges Ignoramuses Naturally
Dain is HOT ... And he's all mine, mine I tell u mine, only Lief can touch him (other than me of course) *still completely and utterly crazy about Dain*
Your lovely pal
AdvanceShipper4Eva
*No-one is to touch MY Dain - yes he is mine now*
Finished Chapter 11 - still swooning only I can only review once
8/3/2010 c4 AdvanceShipper4Eva
watched the Ol's tongue travel across that soft-looking mouth, or the swing of those angular, perfect hips.
*swoons*
I've decided, I shall try to seduce Dain, and bend him to my will *laughs evilly*
Your poetry is actually very good
watched the Ol's tongue travel across that soft-looking mouth, or the swing of those angular, perfect hips.
*swoons*
I've decided, I shall try to seduce Dain, and bend him to my will *laughs evilly*
Your poetry is actually very good
8/3/2010 c11 AdvanceShipper4Eva
Please write more...
Too bad I can't keep Dain for myself *plot forming in twisted mind*
Oh... He and Lief are good tho
Decisions, Decisions - do I try and seduce Dain or Pledge love to Lief
I am sooooo fickle
Ahhh...
Please write more...
Too bad I can't keep Dain for myself *plot forming in twisted mind*
Oh... He and Lief are good tho
Decisions, Decisions - do I try and seduce Dain or Pledge love to Lief
I am sooooo fickle
Ahhh...
8/2/2010 c1 
5Drauph
Very cute golmere. I rather like your style. Keep writing more fanfiction, you should keep developing your skills as a writer since they show much promise, take care and keep at it, yeah? ;p
5DrauphVery cute golmere. I rather like your style. Keep writing more fanfiction, you should keep developing your skills as a writer since they show much promise, take care and keep at it, yeah? ;p
7/18/2010 c11 Fellfire
finally a ch lief/dain ...*sigh*
Thank yooouuuuuuu!
i'm going to read it now! thanks again!
please update soon!
finally a ch lief/dain ...*sigh*
Thank yooouuuuuuu!
i'm going to read it now! thanks again!
please update soon!
10/27/2009 c11 1Courtney1990
Hi Golmere Verns,
I have just started reading this and it is really good! I see you haven't updated in a while though, so I hope you post more soon!
From Courtney.
1Courtney1990Hi Golmere Verns,
I have just started reading this and it is really good! I see you haven't updated in a while though, so I hope you post more soon!
From Courtney.
3/18/2009 c11 35princesircastic
GAH I totally forgot that I hadn't reviewed this chapter. See, when I first tried, the window took forever to load and I got impatient and told myself I'd try again later... and then I forgot. Typical.
SO onto the review...
Filler chapters are essential to a good story, Golmere. Life isn't all about drama and action so it's good to have a little break in between, even if this one still had a touch of drama in it.
Nice chapter, though, so well done for that. Can't wait for the next one =P
- homesweethomicide13
(Female, but a boy at heart XD Sorry, running joke between my friends XD)
35princesircasticGAH I totally forgot that I hadn't reviewed this chapter. See, when I first tried, the window took forever to load and I got impatient and told myself I'd try again later... and then I forgot. Typical.
SO onto the review...
Filler chapters are essential to a good story, Golmere. Life isn't all about drama and action so it's good to have a little break in between, even if this one still had a touch of drama in it.
Nice chapter, though, so well done for that. Can't wait for the next one =P
- homesweethomicide13
(Female, but a boy at heart XD Sorry, running joke between my friends XD)
3/18/2009 c11 21blerghy
Ah, you know me too well. How can I resist a little man-love? XD And I know you'll keep me guessing. That's why I have every intention of writing a story that keeps YOU guessing, as payback. Then my revenge will be complete... Or you'll just tell me what I want to know. Either way. :P
... We were getting to the truth. So nearly there. But no, you had to kepe it from us AGAIN!
"Lief’s blue, blue eyes flickered over to his lover. His traitor. His heartbreaker. His everything for so long." Holy... That is such a romantic line. Sad, yes, but romantic. Beautifully done!
And oh my God... One minute Dain's a total bastard, the next he's incredibly romantic and sweet. Way to confuse us! I'm not angry at him now that he's done that.
And yes, your reviewers are girls. Know why? 'Cause we're COOL. XD You know you love us. And not enough guys are into slash, because they think it takes away from their masculinity, or something. :rolls eyes:
That last scene was awesome. I loved the romance, as I've previously stated. You're getting better and better! :D I'd love to see some more of the romantic stuff as well. It's wonderful to see their relationship becomine deeper (even if Dain's a bastard :P). :D
21blerghyAh, you know me too well. How can I resist a little man-love? XD And I know you'll keep me guessing. That's why I have every intention of writing a story that keeps YOU guessing, as payback. Then my revenge will be complete... Or you'll just tell me what I want to know. Either way. :P
... We were getting to the truth. So nearly there. But no, you had to kepe it from us AGAIN!
"Lief’s blue, blue eyes flickered over to his lover. His traitor. His heartbreaker. His everything for so long." Holy... That is such a romantic line. Sad, yes, but romantic. Beautifully done!
And oh my God... One minute Dain's a total bastard, the next he's incredibly romantic and sweet. Way to confuse us! I'm not angry at him now that he's done that.
And yes, your reviewers are girls. Know why? 'Cause we're COOL. XD You know you love us. And not enough guys are into slash, because they think it takes away from their masculinity, or something. :rolls eyes:
That last scene was awesome. I loved the romance, as I've previously stated. You're getting better and better! :D I'd love to see some more of the romantic stuff as well. It's wonderful to see their relationship becomine deeper (even if Dain's a bastard :P). :D