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3PrincessxXxDarkness
I hope you're still writing this. I love it and want to know what happens next.
3PrincessxXxDarknessI hope you're still writing this. I love it and want to know what happens next.
12/2/2012 c14 LashXMagenta
Continue it I luuuuv it! Ps Lash is soooo hot n it was nast that his own mom rape him do Please continue the story about him nad Magenta I luuuuuv it! :D
Continue it I luuuuv it! Ps Lash is soooo hot n it was nast that his own mom rape him do Please continue the story about him nad Magenta I luuuuuv it! :D
12/1/2012 c14 LashXMagenta
I luuuuuv it! My favorit charater Magenta and Lah r dating! I luuuuuuv it! ΨΨΨΨΩΩΩ
PS PLEASE COTNINUE IT BECAUSE I LUUUUV IT! :D
I luuuuuv it! My favorit charater Magenta and Lah r dating! I luuuuuuv it! ΨΨΨΨΩΩΩ
PS PLEASE COTNINUE IT BECAUSE I LUUUUV IT! :D
9/17/2012 c13 5KARIN848
Okay, so I've read and re-read this story so many times now and I think I've finally snapped. I NEED AN UPDATE! This is a really good idea and I would REALLY love to hear more about what happens next. Please? At least something short, until you feel like writing again. I seriously like this story, and worst of all, you left it off at a clif-hanger! Why would you do this to me? Now keep in mind, I'm not saying all this to be mean or try to guilt to into writing the next chapter or anything. Well, maybe the guilting into writing more thing but definitely not trying to be mean. I just need to know what happens next! Unfortunately, not a lot of people like this pairing, and your stories are really interesting(even if there are some grammer mistakes) so I'm kind of counting on you for my good fanfic needs. I would like to know if you'd be willing to continue this marvelous piece of fanfiction, or I will be absolutely heartbroken. All right, that is all I have to say right now. PLEASE CONSIDER CONTINUING THIS STORY PLEASE. Thank you
5KARIN848Okay, so I've read and re-read this story so many times now and I think I've finally snapped. I NEED AN UPDATE! This is a really good idea and I would REALLY love to hear more about what happens next. Please? At least something short, until you feel like writing again. I seriously like this story, and worst of all, you left it off at a clif-hanger! Why would you do this to me? Now keep in mind, I'm not saying all this to be mean or try to guilt to into writing the next chapter or anything. Well, maybe the guilting into writing more thing but definitely not trying to be mean. I just need to know what happens next! Unfortunately, not a lot of people like this pairing, and your stories are really interesting(even if there are some grammer mistakes) so I'm kind of counting on you for my good fanfic needs. I would like to know if you'd be willing to continue this marvelous piece of fanfiction, or I will be absolutely heartbroken. All right, that is all I have to say right now. PLEASE CONSIDER CONTINUING THIS STORY PLEASE. Thank you
9/15/2012 c14 Guest
what the fuck that is a terrable way to end this fan fiction
what the fuck that is a terrable way to end this fan fiction
6/2/2012 c14 KARIN848
This story is so good! It's really sad, emotional, and depressing, but if you finally come back from the dead and continue this wonderful piece of fiction then there's a chance that it could get better. Sorry if that sounded mean or something but this story is so amazing and such a good idea that I'm upset that it hasn't been updated in forever! Please try to continue! Also, keeping track of all the OCs are hard, but I really like Matt and Saphire's personalities. Anyway, I love how you kept a lot of the characters in character as much as you could considering the type of plot hat it has. Great job overall, seriously! This is so awesome and well-written (Besides maybe some slight, rare grammar mistakes) so please don't give up on it! Keep up the amazing job, thanks! I really, really, really want to know what happens next!
This story is so good! It's really sad, emotional, and depressing, but if you finally come back from the dead and continue this wonderful piece of fiction then there's a chance that it could get better. Sorry if that sounded mean or something but this story is so amazing and such a good idea that I'm upset that it hasn't been updated in forever! Please try to continue! Also, keeping track of all the OCs are hard, but I really like Matt and Saphire's personalities. Anyway, I love how you kept a lot of the characters in character as much as you could considering the type of plot hat it has. Great job overall, seriously! This is so awesome and well-written (Besides maybe some slight, rare grammar mistakes) so please don't give up on it! Keep up the amazing job, thanks! I really, really, really want to know what happens next!
11/20/2011 c14 5near4EVER
Ok so hi are you gonna updatr any sooner
I really like the story update soon please!
5near4EVEROk so hi are you gonna updatr any sooner
I really like the story update soon please!
10/19/2010 c14 3PetrichorAtDawn
Oh wow, this story is so good but SOOO sad! :( I love this story, I feel so sorry for Lash, I can't waitt for more. Please, please, please a million times please REVIEW!
3PetrichorAtDawnOh wow, this story is so good but SOOO sad! :( I love this story, I feel so sorry for Lash, I can't waitt for more. Please, please, please a million times please REVIEW!