
4/22 c12 XXX777
Give Naruto back his blue eyes. You keep writing them as green lately while at the start they were blue.
Give Naruto back his blue eyes. You keep writing them as green lately while at the start they were blue.
3/27 c40 ZicoDGunner
️️️Update needed
Goated fanfiction I couldn't stop reading it
️️️Update needed
Goated fanfiction I couldn't stop reading it
2/28 c1 zaniarein247
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Your story "A Foxes Tale" is more than just words, it’s a masterpiece waiting to be seen!
With its rich world, compelling characters, and gripping plot, your narrative deserves to be brought to life visually.
As a commissioned base artist with 4 years of experience, I specialize in transforming stories into stunning comics that captivate and inspire. Let’s work together to turn your vision into breathtaking art that speaks to the world!
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2/17 c3 Pwrless
Welp it was going alright with half demon naruto which is a neat concept and then you threw in bleach for absolutely no reason other then to make him op and then you ruined it even more by making it a harem. Whatever floats your boat i guess but this just isnt it.
Welp it was going alright with half demon naruto which is a neat concept and then you threw in bleach for absolutely no reason other then to make him op and then you ruined it even more by making it a harem. Whatever floats your boat i guess but this just isnt it.
2/7 c12
3BillionDavid
most of the changes you make in canon are pretty senseless. Neji' eyes not seeing bugs draining him. Also why does your Naruto keep on yapping to his enemies telling them about his abilities?

most of the changes you make in canon are pretty senseless. Neji' eyes not seeing bugs draining him. Also why does your Naruto keep on yapping to his enemies telling them about his abilities?
2/6 c39 CoffeeAficionado1
Just binged this over the past few days, nicely done. A lot of good changes to the original, while keeping a lot of it the same. Sounds like Naruto is going to have several nice wives here, specifically digging the second Tobis wife and her breaking the curse.
Hopefully this time we get to see a certain skeleton based door appear before Obito instead of the crappy “he turned good at the end, he should be rewarded” we had from the original.
Keep up the good work.
Just binged this over the past few days, nicely done. A lot of good changes to the original, while keeping a lot of it the same. Sounds like Naruto is going to have several nice wives here, specifically digging the second Tobis wife and her breaking the curse.
Hopefully this time we get to see a certain skeleton based door appear before Obito instead of the crappy “he turned good at the end, he should be rewarded” we had from the original.
Keep up the good work.
2/6 c9 BillionDavid
Minato uses kunais all the time in his fights. It's not farfetched that some got lost somewhere. Gato probably bought it from someone. Why is Naruto assuming EVERY one of Minato's kunai should be locked in a safe somewhere?
Minato uses kunais all the time in his fights. It's not farfetched that some got lost somewhere. Gato probably bought it from someone. Why is Naruto assuming EVERY one of Minato's kunai should be locked in a safe somewhere?
2/4 c40 Guest
Mei be thirsty
Mei be thirsty
2/4 c40
101VFSNAKE
Nice! Love the fighting. Obito is a whiny bitch. "Oh, I am in pain. The girl I love will never love me and never would in this life. I have to make a false illusion of her to love me." Someone bitch slap Obito! Also, I love how Mei wants Naruto and to be the mother of his children. I can see her marrying Naruto and Gaara has to restrain Tsunade with his sand so she doesn't interfere. LOL!

Nice! Love the fighting. Obito is a whiny bitch. "Oh, I am in pain. The girl I love will never love me and never would in this life. I have to make a false illusion of her to love me." Someone bitch slap Obito! Also, I love how Mei wants Naruto and to be the mother of his children. I can see her marrying Naruto and Gaara has to restrain Tsunade with his sand so she doesn't interfere. LOL!
2/4 c39 marioluciosemedo
NICE! But still where are the Inuyasha group in all of this? Considering the size and magnitude of the Jubi and it's power I would think they would have taken notice that something was happening. Especially since they were undergoing training for the purpose of visiting the lands.
Also can't Naruto change into his full demon state for mor power? And who is that woman who talked with Madara?
Will the previous jinchuriki, as the new Bijju, make a appearance, or the summons, or even the fox clan members?
NICE! But still where are the Inuyasha group in all of this? Considering the size and magnitude of the Jubi and it's power I would think they would have taken notice that something was happening. Especially since they were undergoing training for the purpose of visiting the lands.
Also can't Naruto change into his full demon state for mor power? And who is that woman who talked with Madara?
Will the previous jinchuriki, as the new Bijju, make a appearance, or the summons, or even the fox clan members?
2/4 c40 atengawchok
I like the rebuttal Naruto gave out! Especially the such a bitch comment, lol! Awesome chapter!
I like the rebuttal Naruto gave out! Especially the such a bitch comment, lol! Awesome chapter!
1/2 c39 marioluciosemedo
Where is Guren in all of this?
Are we going to see Inuyasha's group anytime soon, or is it left for the end of the war?
What's happening in they're side of the world?
Where is Guren in all of this?
Are we going to see Inuyasha's group anytime soon, or is it left for the end of the war?
What's happening in they're side of the world?