for A Foxes Tale1/8/2009 c3 hannibal221
just wanted to asked a few questions about your new story it's going to be a harem like the others right? i like the idea of it so far but i'd have to stop reading if hinata wasn't in it
just wanted to asked a few questions about your new story it's going to be a harem like the others right? i like the idea of it so far but i'd have to stop reading if hinata wasn't in it
1/5/2009 c2 XxDragonXxXSlayerxX
“As for the rest of you what you just heard will be classified as a double S class secret. Iruka I want you to investigate the matter concerning Naruto’s time during the academy. I want to know who has played a part in sabotaging the boy’s education and I want to know yesterday(
“As for the rest of you what you just heard will be classified as a double S class secret. Iruka I want you to investigate the matter concerning Naruto’s time during the academy. I want to know who has played a part in sabotaging the boy’s education and I want to know yesterday(
1/5/2009 c3 XxDragonXxXSlayerxX
So far it is a good story but you have made a few mistakes.
You sometimes don't put the correct word and put the incorrect word in its place.
(“There were a few points in your briefing that made no since(
So far it is a good story but you have made a few mistakes.
You sometimes don't put the correct word and put the incorrect word in its place.
(“There were a few points in your briefing that made no since(
1/2/2009 c3 Lexor
heh, kushina and naruto both think out loud! lol. "Umm, i guess you can't just forget that last part?" "Oh sure, let me forget something vital to this village and make sure that it doesn't go on record for you your highness!" - the rest of the conversation as i imagined it. update soon!
heh, kushina and naruto both think out loud! lol. "Umm, i guess you can't just forget that last part?" "Oh sure, let me forget something vital to this village and make sure that it doesn't go on record for you your highness!" - the rest of the conversation as i imagined it. update soon!
1/1/2009 c3 
1Gohan Zero
Very interesting. Ino as a slave because she lost a bet. Hopefully that means Ino is going to be in the harem.
1Gohan ZeroVery interesting. Ino as a slave because she lost a bet. Hopefully that means Ino is going to be in the harem.
1/1/2009 c3 2Blackfang1983
sweet story combining inuyasha and bleach into it...now will this harem have sakura in it or are u gonna give her off to sasuke or lee like in your other stories...also when will you update some of the others
2Blackfang1983sweet story combining inuyasha and bleach into it...now will this harem have sakura in it or are u gonna give her off to sasuke or lee like in your other stories...also when will you update some of the others
1/1/2009 c3 Knives91
Like mother like son... this one thinks those two are going to be the end of Existence as we know it...
Most excellent. More please!
Like mother like son... this one thinks those two are going to be the end of Existence as we know it...
Most excellent. More please!
1/1/2009 c3 HolyKnight5
Hmm..it would be hilarious, that when Ino informs her parents about her thoughtless oath...Inoshi gets crimson on embarrasement, while his wife acquires an amused, nostalgic and romantic expression...as Inoshi did a similar kind of thoughtless oath, ending as the servant of, who would be his wife, and the mother of Ino...
Hmm..it would be hilarious, that when Ino informs her parents about her thoughtless oath...Inoshi gets crimson on embarrasement, while his wife acquires an amused, nostalgic and romantic expression...as Inoshi did a similar kind of thoughtless oath, ending as the servant of, who would be his wife, and the mother of Ino...