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12/4/2008 c1 11chm01
a good start for a fic, just please, don't give naruto fox ears and tail(s)
12/4/2008 c1 spedclass
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
12/3/2008 c1 YOURLORDANDMASTEROFINTERESTING
interesting
12/3/2008 c1 WayDrifter
nice. love the naruto/kushina pairing. hope there will be a lemon soon. Please hurry up with next chapter
12/3/2008 c1 FenrirCrinos
very nice idea, I want to see next chapters and with the described thing until now, you can have harem easily.

the idea of the seal that blocks cerebral functions of naruto or had seen it, but it continues being an excellent idea for fic type, strong naruto or super naruto.

another serious idea for naruto to arm very useful to him. VERY USEFUL, for that podrias to cause that prince conducts a military operation like that whip sword of dark of percia: two trones

chain whip enchants to me, and it could handle naruto it with something similar to the whip of youki of sesshomaru, I give the direction of the image, /Nunchuck/Prince-of-Persia-Dark-Princes-Daggertail-Chain-Whip.html you

now with the one of youko kitzune naruto, you can do much, since naruto must learn to use his thus youki and things.

I wait for more chapters

ja nee
12/3/2008 c1 1AnimeFanatic5602
A nice first start, I hope that you continue it. Excellent work, as always.

See you next chapter (hopefully)!
12/3/2008 c1 Knives91
Wow. That impressive. I like the idea! Pray continue!
12/3/2008 c1 Dragoon740
Not your greatest work. Could probalbly use some more exposition and more details about Naruto and Kushina's thoughts and feelings. But the plot is an excellent idea and I am curious for the rest of the story.
12/3/2008 c1 lunachiarolover
Hey! i really liked this, i cant ait for the next chapter, it sounds amazingly good and everthing was described in a way that you understood yet wondered certain things! many would have had it as confusing as hell! really good job! keep up the work!
12/3/2008 c1 6Nikorasu Za Shugotenshi
LOVE
12/3/2008 c1 2taintedlegacy
Interesting story...keep up the good work.
12/3/2008 c1 Jfitzgerald
Please update again soon. Thanks.
12/3/2008 c1 1Killjoy3000
yo great fic man and as for the coment about ino that was great could you put her in the harem? it will be funny when she goes there and she does seem as though in the show she cares about him but its hard to tell because she is so bossy
12/3/2008 c1 shadowassassin2
cool you started a new story so what type of demon will naruto be a kitsune or something else
12/3/2008 c1 mc2000
this is realy good
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