for A Foxes Tale12/3/2008 c1 Dragoon740
Not your greatest work. Could probalbly use some more exposition and more details about Naruto and Kushina's thoughts and feelings. But the plot is an excellent idea and I am curious for the rest of the story.
Not your greatest work. Could probalbly use some more exposition and more details about Naruto and Kushina's thoughts and feelings. But the plot is an excellent idea and I am curious for the rest of the story.
12/3/2008 c1 lunachiarolover
Hey! i really liked this, i cant ait for the next chapter, it sounds amazingly good and everthing was described in a way that you understood yet wondered certain things! many would have had it as confusing as hell! really good job! keep up the work!
Hey! i really liked this, i cant ait for the next chapter, it sounds amazingly good and everthing was described in a way that you understood yet wondered certain things! many would have had it as confusing as hell! really good job! keep up the work!
12/3/2008 c1 
1Killjoy3000
yo great fic man and as for the coment about ino that was great could you put her in the harem? it will be funny when she goes there and she does seem as though in the show she cares about him but its hard to tell because she is so bossy
1Killjoy3000yo great fic man and as for the coment about ino that was great could you put her in the harem? it will be funny when she goes there and she does seem as though in the show she cares about him but its hard to tell because she is so bossy
12/3/2008 c1 shadowassassin2
cool you started a new story so what type of demon will naruto be a kitsune or something else
cool you started a new story so what type of demon will naruto be a kitsune or something else
12/3/2008 c1 landoffire
it is a very good beginning. i am intrigued with this story. i am interested. wonder what kushina will teach him, and will they tell the old man? looking forward to the next chapter. keep writing. update soon please.
it is a very good beginning. i am intrigued with this story. i am interested. wonder what kushina will teach him, and will they tell the old man? looking forward to the next chapter. keep writing. update soon please.