for A Foxes Tale10/5/2024 c18 hennessyswagg83
Are you a published writer with your manga series as you fail to account for is that some decisions both for the manga and anime series ran through publishers and producers before the finish product and any suggestions they had was taken highly into account.
Are you a published writer with your manga series as you fail to account for is that some decisions both for the manga and anime series ran through publishers and producers before the finish product and any suggestions they had was taken highly into account.
10/5/2024 c14 hennessyswagg83
Yondaime didn't create the Hiraishin he just improved it to the next level but its creator like many other jutsu was the Nidaime Tobirama.
Yondaime didn't create the Hiraishin he just improved it to the next level but its creator like many other jutsu was the Nidaime Tobirama.
10/5/2024 c13 hennessyswagg83
Yet another trope the series never showed or mentioned Kushina ever referring to Jiraiya as such in fact it's shown that he started the Icha Icha series after the Kyūbi Attack.
Yet another trope the series never showed or mentioned Kushina ever referring to Jiraiya as such in fact it's shown that he started the Icha Icha series after the Kyūbi Attack.
10/5/2024 c13 hennessyswagg83
I believe you should've just given them different demon mothers instead since their father Butsuma was already shown in the series
I believe you should've just given them different demon mothers instead since their father Butsuma was already shown in the series
10/5/2024 c9 hennessyswagg83
What the hell are you talking bout Hinata doesn't have the personality that would help Naruto set his priorities straight. What strong bond are you speaking of the only interaction in the manga they had was her wishing good luck for the Finals and him defeating Neji "on her behalf" if that's how you wanna perceive his declaration at the end of the Preliminaries. All she did outside of that was stalk Naruto watching him work hard to overcome his shortcomings and loneliness. Kishimoto chose Hinata as the pairing was the publishers' decision to appease Hinata fans since a majority of people hated Sakura both for her uselessness and treatment of Naruto throughout the series. Also, you can't even look underneath the underneath because Naruto's comment to Sasuke wasn't him saying he's gonna sacrifice himself against Sasuke. It just was his way of telling Sasuke and telling everyone else that the only one who could handle or defeat Sasuke was him and that the battle would most likely end them both dying rather than Sasuke winning.
What the hell are you talking bout Hinata doesn't have the personality that would help Naruto set his priorities straight. What strong bond are you speaking of the only interaction in the manga they had was her wishing good luck for the Finals and him defeating Neji "on her behalf" if that's how you wanna perceive his declaration at the end of the Preliminaries. All she did outside of that was stalk Naruto watching him work hard to overcome his shortcomings and loneliness. Kishimoto chose Hinata as the pairing was the publishers' decision to appease Hinata fans since a majority of people hated Sakura both for her uselessness and treatment of Naruto throughout the series. Also, you can't even look underneath the underneath because Naruto's comment to Sasuke wasn't him saying he's gonna sacrifice himself against Sasuke. It just was his way of telling Sasuke and telling everyone else that the only one who could handle or defeat Sasuke was him and that the battle would most likely end them both dying rather than Sasuke winning.
10/4/2024 c7 hennessyswagg83
What color are Naruto's eyes you've written them as being deep blue and emerald green now it could be because he's using his sentient Zanpatou (real word Zanpakutō) Katana?
What color are Naruto's eyes you've written them as being deep blue and emerald green now it could be because he's using his sentient Zanpatou (real word Zanpakutō) Katana?
10/4/2024 c6 hennessyswagg83
I thought I was going to enjoy this story even with you following stupid tropes that make no sense but now I don't know if I can with lovingly sucking on Namikaze's d**k so much it overshadows a clan descending from the SOSP smh. Not to mention for you thoughtless people who wish to say he's Tsunade's son then that'll make him a Senju and Namikaze a fake name given to hide his identity. It sickens me how you people just can't let Naruto be who even Kishimoto wanted him to be and that's an Uzumaki. A clan with great history and prestige in the Narutoverse enough that they were destroyed by not one hidden village but three being on par with their distant cousins the Senju, Uchiha and Hyuga.
I thought I was going to enjoy this story even with you following stupid tropes that make no sense but now I don't know if I can with lovingly sucking on Namikaze's d**k so much it overshadows a clan descending from the SOSP smh. Not to mention for you thoughtless people who wish to say he's Tsunade's son then that'll make him a Senju and Namikaze a fake name given to hide his identity. It sickens me how you people just can't let Naruto be who even Kishimoto wanted him to be and that's an Uzumaki. A clan with great history and prestige in the Narutoverse enough that they were destroyed by not one hidden village but three being on par with their distant cousins the Senju, Uchiha and Hyuga.
10/4/2024 c4 hennessyswagg83
If there's a trope I hate it's Minato somehow being Tsunade's son just because people just can't accept that he came from an ordinary shinobi family with great potential that was fully realized.
If there's a trope I hate it's Minato somehow being Tsunade's son just because people just can't accept that he came from an ordinary shinobi family with great potential that was fully realized.
10/4/2024 c5 hennessyswagg83
Both of Sakura's parents were explained as having been Chūnin before retiring. It's never been explained what they do as retired shinobis though. Team 7 are some of the only genin that both parents were exposed to having been shinobi.
Both of Sakura's parents were explained as having been Chūnin before retiring. It's never been explained what they do as retired shinobis though. Team 7 are some of the only genin that both parents were exposed to having been shinobi.
10/4/2024 c2 hennessyswagg83
I know your story is an AU but we've learned that Minato wasn't on Team 7 but Team 6 under Jiraiya with a possible Kumo orphan named Dekai due to him looking like a Chōji version of Omoi. The last team member was named but it's a guy instead of a female and he has the Uchiha's dark features but doesn't showcase the Sharingan while fighting against Han and Roshi during the Third Shinobi World War.
I know your story is an AU but we've learned that Minato wasn't on Team 7 but Team 6 under Jiraiya with a possible Kumo orphan named Dekai due to him looking like a Chōji version of Omoi. The last team member was named but it's a guy instead of a female and he has the Uchiha's dark features but doesn't showcase the Sharingan while fighting against Han and Roshi during the Third Shinobi World War.
9/30/2024 c15 tylor13roney
making ororchimaru so stupid.
is. lame.
he literally sent his 3 in charge to assinate naruto yet his target is alive and she is missing yet he is still going into the trap.
unless later in the story i find he has more plans then im out too many people make naruto smarter and forgive the villlage while save the villagers and all konoha become smarter to.
i bet pein will trip and fall and die when he gets news on how op naruto is and how konoha became so smart and stronger while everyone else is stupider then sakura affection for sasuke
making ororchimaru so stupid.
is. lame.
he literally sent his 3 in charge to assinate naruto yet his target is alive and she is missing yet he is still going into the trap.
unless later in the story i find he has more plans then im out too many people make naruto smarter and forgive the villlage while save the villagers and all konoha become smarter to.
i bet pein will trip and fall and die when he gets news on how op naruto is and how konoha became so smart and stronger while everyone else is stupider then sakura affection for sasuke